forum Critique my elementals please!
Started by @ElderGod-Icefire
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@ElderGod-Icefire

So before y'all critique, yes, I did want them to be a little cliche, hence the element related names and looks. This is due to their culture, which frequently named elemental children after their element, and their looks are often related to their element as well. If you have any questions, let me know!
Earth: Avani Jaearto
Air: Skye Havens
Water: Tempest Kiere
Fire: Kindle Grey
Thank you so much!

@YourNightmare

I love Avani. She seems free and just a joy. I love Skye too, she seems relatable. She seems like the muscle of the group, like she has such a shallow temper when it comes to people she doesn't like. I like Tempest, she seems like the brains of the group. I love the way you made her backstory. She seems like the one who everyone in the group has a soft spot for or when she talks people listen to her. I love Kindle too, she seems like the jokester. I have a couple questions though. Is it bad to not be an elemental because the only one who doesn't have elemental parents are Avani, not saying it's a bad thing just curious. Second question, can guys not become elementals? Just curious too. My final question is how do they decide who is going to the towers or not? Is it the people that are born or do they choose? But other than that I love your elementals. Great job on them, I think people will really like them.