I started mine early because I have somewhere to be, I have a few notes since my universes are kind of a flaming dumpster.
That's it, have fun guys.
OMG YOU HAVE SO MUCH TO LOOK AT! i choose Ezkah because it sounded cool and your description caught my eye.
47 CREATURES?? 47? YOU HAVE A WHOLE ECOSYSTEM AND THAT'S SO COOL! I was browsing through them and my personal favorites were: pseudo bear (because your reasoning is perfect), salty goat (AN AMAZING NAME PLEASE KEEP IT?) and a zipper (also amazing name)
For your characters, I chose Switchblade because 1, AMAZING NAME! 2, because your description is very funny to me.
Theres not much on him so really the only thing I can say is add more to his profile! Also why is Mikal allowed to call him by his real name if they are rivals?
I also looked at Stain and ngl I was surprised she was a girl? Idk the name Stain made me think of a boy (which is fine ofc) Why did she choose that name?
Why does stain have bad grammar? Is it a lisp of some sort? or maybe her level of education?
I like the drawing you did for her! The clothes look so good, it was hard to imagine from your description BUT OMG THE ART PULLS IT TOGETHER VERY WELL. I love how you draw clothes!!
I love it all so far, PLEASE TELL ME WHAT A PSEUDO BEAR AND A ZIPPER LOOKS LIKE THEY SOUND SO COOL! @bleh
My day started little bit ago, I only just woke up but I made everything public ahead, go at it
Okay @Darkblossom, I mostly looked at Your Celestial Kingdoms universe, and I like it. The magic system is really interesting. I think right now my favorite character is Gavrin, because I love shapeshifters. I'm a little confused as to why the other 2 are both tagged as villains and protagonists but are enemies. Are you writing from both perspectives?
The book is mostly from Lorrehlyl's perspective, a little bit of Rogan's, but when I label people as main characters I do that meaning their importance to the story, not necessarily how much screen-page time they get. Rogan is the antagonist, because he is in direct opposition to Lorrehlyl the viewpoint character, but Lyl is a classical villain and labeled as such, so its a little confusing.
Agh, I am so sorry I missed my time today! I will just put them up now and they'll probably stay up until sometime on Friday. Thank you in advance for the feedback!
@Never-Forget Well, the main critique I have for your pages is that they're not very detailed
I only looked at the characters in the universe Civil War 2, and I like the idea of art as magic, but how does it work?
I also like how you name characters. That's just something I'm not good at, so I found it impressive.
Sorry if this wasn't helpful, I really don't know how to give critiques :l
@bleh Thank you for the feedback!
The Civil War 2 is a story I'm writing with my brother. Basically, if you're skilled enough at something, you can do anything. For this reason, most people become very skilled at only a few things. For instance, someone who draws might become very good at drawing landscapes and could use this power to distort the space into the space s/he drew. If anything is an art form, then it is considered magic. Drawing, painting, calligraphy, creative writing of any sort, cooking, music, dancing, pottery, weaving, scribing, forging, etc. Honestly, other than things like that, I'm still trying to figure it out.
(is this still open? i'd love to participate!!!)