forum Character Requests (This is closed now but I made another one.
Started by @mintchocolatechip
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@mintchocolatechip

@CurtisFamWriters

Okay so here is my drawing of Elliot https://ibb.co/nB8pryW
(With a wink because I’m lazy and decided I wanted to draw one)

And my critique:
Okay I would like to start by saying this character is fabulous and I can tell you out a lot of thought into Elliot. I like the backstory, and the whole possession thing. Let’s talk about his personality for a hot second. You say he’s charismatic. But is he an optimist? A pessimist? Does his personality swap because of the demon having split personalities? I mean a demon literally possessed him and murdered his parents. I feel like this would affect him in some way. Maybe charisma is a way to hide some sadness/guilt? Maybe he’s the type of person to be positive all the time and got over his parents by this point in the story. After all, I’m guessing that Elliot’s got a lot on his plate. Unless “without his knowledge” means he literally doesn’t know that his parents are dead, because that’s a whole other thing that I would talk about. How I personally took it was that he didn’t realize what was going on when it happened. Still, I feel like interacting with demons and magic and stuff would have some sort of effect on a kid like him. To be honest this is my only major critique, because this character seems well planned and I like him. Good luck with your writing and I hope that I could be of service! Best wishes
-Meadow

@mintchocolatechip

@Kohaku Okay imma be honest I’m loving this Narion character and actually can’t find anything bad to say about them so good on you. Thanks for asking, though! They were really cool to read about. Have a good day!

@CopperQueen

Hey, so if it's open, could you help me with the design of this characher for a game I've been making with friends (maybe draw it or suggest some changes) Because we're currently only doing the looks of them