forum Character Critique Shop!

Started March 12, 2018 by @The Seliph-loving Gryffindor who also loves dragons and cats

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Heyy i was wondering if you could critique my boy Ace here

Specify how his mother died. But good!

@Flowerfur, Lover of Seliph

Thank you so much!

One would assume she died giving birth to him, but is there another reason? Like, sacrifice or murder?

@Flowerfur, Lover of Seliph

I was going to say she died giving birth, but i guess it would be less cliche if she died maybe a few months after he was born of an unknown sickness.

Also, crits for my characters are welcome here!

I know I have had Lucas here before but, could anyone critique him again??
Thanks!

I just realized:
Why the actual (excuse my language here) fuck would someone put down a 2 year old?

Sayuri Isuko Got her finished, a bit worried that she's a Mulan ripoff.

Alexei Vladovich Petrov Could I get a critique for this boi?

this was actually for my characters too, wtf happened

Also, Alexei seems kind of like a stereotyped Russian. I'd like him to redeem, personally.