@Kinarymo
Invalid Character I want to focus on personality and backstory! Take your time!
Srry for not responding in so long, so here i go :'D
Alright, so this sounds like a rlly interesting character :0 His personality seems alright, just a tad bit crowded, but it makes sense :'))
As for the backstory, it's really complex and detailed, a little confusing for me, but it's pretty good nonetheless :0
Over all he's a pretty good character :0
Side notes: flaws can also be physical, not just personality flaws; prejudices are personal beliefs your character has, that aren't based on fact, they just believe it (Like, broccoli looks weird, therefore must taste horrible)
Hope it helped o3o
