forum Character Chat-

Started January 29, 2018 by Claire

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Share your character's link and I'll help edit it!
Anyone can join in and help or give characters!

Here you go:

I haven't written the background part

Here's my most recent one, thanks!

I like your character Rae!

@Masterkey i love rose's nicknames omg. looking forward to her backstory, it definitely seems like it'd be interesting.

@Rae Marcus what a fancy name! He seems a little underweight, but I love the little description of his childhood injury and the description of his 'verse seems so interesting!

Magus I'm…. working on him.

@FantaPop Thank you! It's a fancy name mostly because he is far from fancy, I fell in love with the name Gerard, and I found that to be a really nice contridiction. He's my skinny little brain child, and he's not very active, but I think the complications that adds to his life keep him modest. Thanks for the feedback!
I found your charachter very intriguing, to say the least. Why doesn't he share his name? (I know you are probebly working on the backstory, but thought I would point it out.) He's feeling a little two- dimensional, he seems to have reactions and reasons, but wouldn't stand out in a group of other troubled charachters. I'd say that the more situations you throw him into, even and especially scenarios that have nothing to do with the story really creates a strong voice for charachters. The more charachters they interact with, the more you realize who they do and do not get along with, even if they don't belong in the same universe.
He jsut ran into a cute girl in a coffee shop, and there's obviously chemestry- does he pursue it, does he try and make friendly conversation? Does he run away from the whole thing?
What if he got mugged on his way home from an office job, or a guy started hitting him up at a club?
Knowing how he will react to everyone and everything, and knowing how he thinks he would react (Is there a difference for him?) will help him feel less like paperwork.

@Rae Marcus, thanks for the feedback! I'm probably going to change a lot of things about him as I go along - gotta figure out how magic affects him, first and foremost, and how he deals with that, and fine tune a lot of his personality ^^; (I've also been meaning to rp with him to figure out a lot more, but my partner's taking a break from it and I'm Dying(tm) without them)

I like Magus so far, but Rae is right that he's a little underdeveloped. But that's okay, you've got a good start.

So I'm fresh out of ideas for a bug man archer and I need some suggestions for mannerisms and stuff, it's pretty junky so far so yeah…..

Invalid Character I'm writing a musical about Anne Frank, and this is the stuff I have down for her so far. Any suggestions on making her feel more human?

@lonnielei I love how you worded your flaws! I'm dying of laughter, TBH!
And for prejudices, I know it may seem hard to admit, but EVERYBODY has a prejudice. If you want to make her seem more human, you have to point out that there is a little bit of hate in her. . . that's one of the human's flaws, after all!

Invalid Character I'm writing a story about a 17 year old girl trying to be a vampire huntress just like her deceased mother was. Her name is Eildia Kianalith. :)

I need some help with him. He's a bit of a blank slate at the mo'

Here is my child Lucas. I would just like a little critique. Thank you!!

This is Markus:) Markus Lane Hill

this is my naga child, his name is Apophis

please love him <3