forum Bring your children for me to critique. (closed for now)

Started April 04, 2020 by @moss

tune

Hey! It would make my day if you would take a stab at my character. I'm still working out her backstory on paper, so that section will be blank:

@Oakley-is-Oaken-Bull

Looks: I understand how you feel about the weight part but I think you should have some sort of estimate. The average for someone 5’ 7 would be anywhere between 122-163. Since Dakota is supposed to weigh a lot, you could base their weight from that.

Sorry it's so short but honestly I couldn’t find any critiques other than that. Dakota is very well written so props to you.

Hi, could you possibly critique my character Veda? I have a lot of her specifics and backstory on paper, so apologies if it’s a little vague. Thanks! Veda Libertas

I'm not very good at character creating or anything, this character is my first kinda finished one, so I was just wondering if you could critique him. My descriptions can be kinda sloppy, so it's kinda hard to read, but I would really appreciate it! :D

@Oakley-is-Oaken-Bull

Looks: I understand how you feel about the weight part but I think you should have some sort of estimate. The average for someone 5’ 7 would be anywhere between 122-163. Since Dakota is supposed to weigh a lot, you could base their weight from that.

Sorry it's so short but honestly I couldn’t find any critiques other than that. Dakota is very well written so props to you.

Personally, I really don't see any point at all to adding a weight, but thank-you regardless! ^^ I really appreciate you taking the time to look them over :D