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Lol the changing in sizes and fonts is kinda frustrating. 


  Weak sunshine filtered through a grey sky. The wind wheezed over a stretch of yellowed grass, 

  A blackbird, flapping its large wings, alighted down on the grass. Its beady eyes darted back and forth, 


She stared at him blankly. "You're not supposed to be here."

The colt shuffled his hooves self-consciously. "Can't we play for a little bit? 


  Her hair bushed out, standing on end. Her skin prickled as a tingling sensation spread across her entire body. 

  Lightning struck, more and more in quick succession all around her. A single bolt struck her directly, turning the world to white. 

Beneath her hooves, the grass tore away, turned to ash under the pulsating, powerful bolt. It dug deep into the dirt, revealing bare mountain stone.

Energy and adrenaline charged every muscle and vein. Panting, she raised her glowing eyes, as the stone cracked below her. 

  A scream ripped its way from her throat, as the sky-bolt grew thicker and brighter, boring it's way into the mountain. The mountain burst, thick slabs of stone exploding outwards. 


Lil thought thang:
Chrysalis obtains the last Element of Harmony, the one that's always kept safe. It's just a circular rock, so she shapes it into a gem after breaking it or something. And it's black, instead of its natural green. The Elements of Harmony destroy it to stop Queen Chrysalis, and no one knows that it was an element. 
Hmm, if it's the Element of unity, then they destroyed unity...but what unity? Maybe the Nightmare Forces somehow got a hold of her, so they broke that.


What's King Sombra after in the Crystal Empire? 
He wants to build up enough power inside Coal to be able to transform back into a dragon. He and Moon Spark planned this (What's 'ol Moony after, then?). She'd put his remains in an Amulet that, when worn by a Unicorn, would corrupt the bearer and help store up enough power to perform a large transformation. Hopefully, Sombra would be corrupted enough to be the first dragon to use magic like ponies. Then they'd be able to revive Lorelei, and no one would be able to stop them. Their magical abilities combined would be incomprehensivly powerful.
Maybe Moony is the one who brings the Amulet to the Empire. Either she comes as a shadow and personally gives it to Coal or something, or she went there while still a pony and hid it somewhere. He'd be near his wife's heart, maybe. And maybe when Nebula -- blah-blah-blah, bonds with the heart, sounds so cringey -- she also opens something that leads to where the Amulet is. (Or Coal felt something and it started driving him crazy, so he went searching for it. But then I'd have to explain why it drove him and only him crazy...)
They didn't count on the Amulet being destroyed, which was partly due to Sombra's power-craze during the transformation, and Nebula's protective love for her daughter and subjects. So Sombra, not knowing where Moon Spark went, demanded that Nebula help him continue the transformation and restore him. But during this time, Nebula was still recovering from her battle with him, and was unable to help him. (Not only that, she had no idea what to do. This was beyond her.) So he imprisoned -- and pretty much forgot about X) -- her, and set to the task of enslaving the Crystal ponies so they could bring him gems. These kept him alive, as his health slowly deteriorated without them. 
After being turned to shadow by Celestia and Luna, he went to the place where Shadow Spark was, and where Lorelei's children rested. The two were now pretty much stuck together. 
After Lorelei's reawakening, she went to find and wake up her children, and happened to see Shadow and Sombra. She didn't interact with them, however -- that's not what she was after. Plus she didn't realize at the time that they had her magic. But when her children were defeated, she went back to them, and the three formed an alliance. The Nightmare aspects of the two wanted to rejoin Lorelei. The pony in both wanted this to end. And Sombra just wanted everyone dead. XP Lorelei proposed they all join together, along with the one who had been born an Alicorn, who probably had vast amounts of power. If she could be corrupted, she would help intensify their own powers, and they would be able to annihilate Equestria. But it all had to be done very carefully.
Shadow Spark would go on ahead to Equestria and capture Celestia and Luna, and bring them t‎o Lorelei, who would take their magic or force them to move the sun and moon. The plan here was to have the light shine on Equestria in such a way, that a pool of shadow would appear in the center of the world and a gateway between Equestria and the shadowworld would be created, allowing the less powerful inhabitants to come out and wreak havoc. Then they would save the two princesses for Sombra.
Sombra would travel to the dragons, and ask them to stand by him and help make the ponies pay for their crimes. They would also drive apart the larger tribes of Equestria, like the Yaks, Changelings, Hippogryphs and Griffins. If they were driven apart, they wouldn't be able to help the ponies.


Flurry wouldn't mind that, she supposed. Dahliah seemed to be the only one who trusted Flurry not to turn her inside out with her magic. The kindly librarian had befriended Flurry Hearts a few years ago, comforting her when she'd accidently blasted a hole in the side of Canterlot Castle. Her presence was extremely calming, and she'd offered to read a story to Flurry. Since then, every time Flurry and her mother visited Canterlot, Dahliah found the time to read more stories to Flurry in Twilight's reading garden. 


(Brainstorming purge)



I need to figure out where I come into the story. Do I appear in Revival, like I originally wrote? Or should I come in earlier, and I'm the one who help Twilight learn the Empire's history? Perhaps I'm living in the Crystal Empire, or maybe visiting, and feel the need to recount the story of the Empire to her as I see it?

And Tempest, too. If she's going to be an element bearer, she needs more attention. Flurry Heart, too.

So, Shadow Spark coming in and just killing Celestia and Luna seems a little -- lazy. I mean, it's dramatic and all, but maybe, instead of her just coming in and killing them immediately, maybe she plays with them immediately. Or there's more time before she comes.


How bout this: The New Elements are formed somewhere in the middle of Time Whispers (And nooo, just because Flurry doesn't get her Element right away, that doesn't mean it isn't formed. It's just there.) So then the three sisters are captured.


THE CRYSTAL EMPIRE WAS FOUNDED BY FORMER MEMBERS OF ALIDIA WHO LEFT BECAUSE THE SYSTEM WASN'T SOUND YET AND THEY'RE LIKE, "Pah, who needs these guys? Let's go make our own Empire, blah-blah-blah." SO THEY DID, BUT MAYBE THEY WERE DESTINED TO BECOME CRYSTAL KEEPERS BUT -- Wait, backtrack.
So maybe they were Crystal Keepers. But my original idea was that they weren't Alicorns yet, and non-Alicorns can't give birth to Alicorns -- which doesn't make sense. Eh, I'll come back to this.

Okay, so, now Silurian will be a part of the Beyond story, instead of Stardust. So the royal sisters probably don't encounter him, though they do hear of him in their short time living in Alidia.

One very interesting question I have...
If Liliane taught Equestrians how to make Alicorns, how did the Crystal Empire know how to make Alicorns?
Hmm...since Celestia and Luna went to the Empire to get rid of Sombra, maybe they had been there before. Maybe the Crystal ponies figured out how to make artificial Alicorns, and that's where it started.
Ooh, maybe Liliane passes through the Empire on her way to center Equestria. Maybe she even stops for a while.
Maybe Lorelei and the other two Think that Flurry Heart is the one they ultimately need, but it's actually Twilight Sparkle. Perhaps Coal and Moony are related to Lorelei as well, and that would make three Unicorns turned Alicorn -- fuuuuuuuudge.....
Okay, but if Moony is related to Lorelei, then maybe the mysterious stallion can't do you-know-what. Cause then they'd all REALLY be related. 
I suppose if Alberich is the father of both families, then they're all related anyway. ‎Buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut...
Okey-pokey...so now what?


Maybe, juuust maybe..............
Twilight Sparkle is decent from Lorelei, on her dad's side. (Her dad because his coat color is closer to Lorelei's than her mother's.)
ULTIMATE. MWUAHAHAHAHA. XD

(Choir)
EPIPHANY!!!
Lauren gives Star Swirl the gem tree seed, maybe not necessarily as a protection gift. Perhaps she intended to bring it to Equestria only to keep it from Lorelei. So that's also part of why they put her to death when she goes back. Then Moon Spark, infected with the Nightmare Forces -- aka Lorelei's magic -- shatters the gem. 

What if Lorelei's magic is the NIGHTMARE FORCES?!?! 

MWUAHAHAHAHA
This is my headcanon.
Without control, magic expands upon itself and grows stronger. Therefore, Lorelei's magic -- once it escapes from the jar -- slowly grows and envelopes the entire underground level of Portmanteau. 
Stuff like the Alicorn Amulet, Inspiration Manifestation, and the Elements are different. They each have an allotted vessel, one that is designed to contain their magic. The Everfree forest technically expands upon itself, as the forest isn't quite a proper vessel.
Once the land of the Alicorns had collapsed, the Nightmare Forces seeped into the earth. Equestria would have become a barren wasteland, if not for the magic the Equestrians had. It kept the Nightmare Forces at bay. 
(Time Whispers)
Equestria is now like the jar; able to hold back most of the dark magic, but some still seeps through the cracks. And now the foundations are crumbling, and the dark ones will consume all.
(I sounded really emo at the end there, omg XD 
I mean, imagine it being said emo-y: 
And the dark ones will consume aaaaaaallll...)

The Nightmare Forces took a long time to open a hole in the jar and seep out, to eventually crumble Portmanteau's foundations. Once the foundations fall, they damage the pot just enough to let the rest of the magic slip out easily.

There's always a pattern. There's always three, and always a fourth. 
Somehow, they find out that Tempest, Dahliah and Nebula are supposed to wield new elements. But later, they discover, there's one more. Who is it?
It is revealed to be Flurry Heart, in Incarnate. ‎


I have a theory -- that MLP time differs from our time. 
As far as I know, this is how things went.
Celestia raised the sun for the first time, marking a point in history that would be celebrated yearly in the future. Then Luna let the Nightmare Forces within her, and Celestia had to banish her. ‎One thousand years later, Twilight Sparkle was reading a book that foretold the escape of Nightmare Moon, on the longest day of the thousandth year. 
After that, Princess Twilight Sparkle approached Celestia with an idea for a stage play, saying it was to honor the sun princess's Ones-versery -- the 1,111 day since Celestia first raised the sun. 
At the school of friendship, the students vote for Teacher of the Month. Fluttershy has held that position, nine months running. 
Considering the fact that hardly anyone seems to age despite what seems to be a great passage of time, I think Equestrian time runs differently from ours.
(One flaw I see in this is the fact that there are 365 days in a year, and 111 days doesn't add up to much. Even adding the nine months from the school, it's only been a little over two years, I think.
Wait -- I think Twilight said YEAR, and I said DAY.)

Why would Shadow Spark kill Celestia and Luna, but not the others? 

Show of power, while also getting rid of the two most powerful princessess? Not only that, they can bring the sun and moon down from the sky with those two gone. Plus, she made a deal with Sombra: He gets the Mane Six, she gets the Pillars.
Why not kill Cadence? 
Because Sombra wants her. ‎


What if the Alicorns changed the way things work in Equestria? Perhaps, in Portmanteau, there is no sun or moon.
The Everfree forest seems to work on it's own, like forests in real life. So what if, that's how the sun and moon used to work? If Equestrians saw that Alicorns are powerful enough to move celestial bodies, they might turn to these beings for leadership, and soon come to depend on them.

Sombra will treat the Heart in a tender sort of fashion, since it belonged to his wife.

(NEEDS UPDATING)

Okay, real quick idea
STYGIAN IS MOON SPARK'S FRIEND
MWUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
What's Stygian's backstory? 
He is the one who made the Pillars famous, the one who planned battle strategies and things like that. 
"I wanted their respect! I brought them together. I planned strategies and I read all I could about the beasts we faced. But I didn't have magic, or strength. So nopony ever noticed me.
"I went to Ponhenge to make my own copies of the artifacts. With them, I thought I could be a Pillar, too, and stand by their side in battle. I never wanted to steal their power. But instead of sharing and letting me help -- my friends threw me out. So I became stronger than any of them. The darkness welcomed me when nopony would, and I will do what I must to protect it."
"The shadow isn't who you are. Let me help you be Stygian again!"
Maybe he didn't know that Moony became TPOS. At the beginning of his story told by the Pillars, he is walking along forlornly, carrying a cliche red and white sack on a stick. Something like this: Moon Spark's parents don't like Stygian, and Stygian has no one, so he left the mountain village, promising to Moon Spark that he would return. While he is traveling, he finds the Pillars, and they find the Sirens laying waste to everything. Perhaps Moony told Stygian about her skilled Unicorn brother, and he decided to make himself great in Star Swirl's eyes. He would return to Moon Spark, but first, he would become like the Pillars. When they cast him out, he decided he would return anyway. But when he went back...he found the village in ruins. Not knowing it was Moon Spark's doing, he assumed that it was the work of the Sirens after he left, and before they were banished. 
It was there that the shadows found him.
Noice, yah cinnamon roll. :)
Stygian is still young, so if his family moves out of the mountains, he goes with them. But if his family dies, or casts him out, or they loose track of each other (probably the last one), then that would explain his presence in the village being devastated by the Sirens. 
Stygian told Moon Spark that he loved strategy, planning -- all that, but he also told her about how he wanted to contribute to the world, make things right. 
So before he went back to the mountain village, he stayed with the Pillars and helped them defeat several enemies. He was living his dream -- but only partly, as he was always in the background, never in the spotlight. No, that part of the stage was occupied by the Pillars -- the group he himself had brought together.
 When he saw the chance to steal the show, he took it -- and tried to make copies of each artifact of the Pillars. But the curtain was closed on his plan, and the Pillars banished him from the group.
 Ashamed, he decided to return to his mountain home. Hoping that, after all this time, Moon Spark would still be there, still remember him and the things they had talked about together. 
 But the village had been completely destroyed


Hehe...what did the ponies do wrong with King Sombra? 
All of it. }:)
1: He was driven from his home 
2: Killed his wife and took her heart 
3: Nearly killed him, then sealed him inside an amulet
4: Celestia/Luna turned him to shadow
5: 
6: 
7: Mane Six helped get rid of him again

I have yet another idea. ;)
Crystal Chronicles extras. Like: Ruby's Curse, Tiger Eye's Silence, (hmm, sounds like Warriors stuff), Moon Spark's Shadow, Nebula's...something, and if anyone wants other stories, I shall oblige. Mwuahahaha. *Strokes invisible villain mustache*


Hehe...if Moony goes through the castle killing the guards and such...what happens to loverboy, aka Flash Sentry? >:)
Do you support the ship?
I dunno. *shrug*
Not good enough. *frowny face*
:/
Okay, what about Shining Armor? 
BURNANATING EVERYBO--
OY!

How many times have you complained about the number three...
At least six. 
Well, HECK WITH THIS, OMG.‎ >0<

How did they defeat each villain? 
Nightmare Moon = elements. 
Discord = elements 
Sombra = heart
Sunset = elements 
Tirek = box-thingy 
Sirens = music-stuff
Tantebus = um...imagination?
Midnight Sparkle = Daydream Shimmer
Gaia Everfree = um...weird elements 
Stygian, POS = ALL DA ELEMENTS
Ultimately, most of these villains were defeated 
WITH THE POWAH O FRIENDSHIP, YO
Dragon King Sombra = Gruesome deeeaaath
Chrysalis = Sisters
Ehvul dehmon shpirits = NEW DA ELEMENTS
Lorelei = NEW DA ELEMENTS + ULTIMATE FRIENDSHIP POWAAAAH
Sixteen villains. (Holy crickets, that's a lot.)
Which is eight, which is...you know, three plus five and all that, yada-yada. 
Not three AGAIN, oy. Now eight? Ugh.

You keep referring to the shadow-arm-thingys as being like the arms of an octopus. 
Octopuses arms = Eight
Demon = Five letters
Sombra + Spark + Flurry = Three
Five + three = eight
There are eight Alicorns
AGAIN WITH THE THREE, COME ON


Huh...wouldn't it be cool if you had Shadow Spark (ooh, me likey) laughing, but if you play it backwards, she's screaming in pain? 
Wow -- that's an interesting idea.  

A dragon that can use magic? Huh.
Her skin was orange, and her spikes were yellow. One of Andromeda's?
Maybe, after having Tiger Eye, she also has a baby dragon. Since dragons are hatched from eggs, rather than just born, and they also have different needs, she leaves the little dragon with a female. She knows she can't take care of it. So she doesn't tell Pyro that she gave it away, instead pretending that it died. 
Later, the dragon grows up to be an impressive female, with skin the color of carrots, spikes like butter, and dark crimson eyes. Her foster mother had named her (). 
At the top of her head, one of her spikes juts out in a peculiar way, and is smaller, sharper, than the rest. One day, she finds out that she can perform magic with this little horn.

Which story will you put out first? And what will you put it on? A blog, or Deviantart, etc? Maaaybe a blog...or just a website, with Wix.
I personally think you should do Reflective Waters. Make a big name for yourself right away.
But, name for thing? I don't think it should just be 'PurplePartyTiger'. Hmmm.‎ WTF, MY NAME IS THREE, TOO. WHAT THE #?!$ IS GOING ON...
Oh, OK, so it Could be PPT. That's fine.
But, I dunno...think, maybe, you should talk to mom and dad first? *Shrug*

The king and queen have, all of a sudden, just disappeared? *Gasp* oh no! Confusion laces the Empire, and now Nebula will be forced to lead her subjects all on her own! Or will she? Because she can (and will) appoint Coal as her advisor!

(NEEDS UPDATING)

The number three seems to be a recurring theme here; three Alicorn sisters, one has a daughter; one EP and two Unicorn sisters; THREE DEAD PRINCESS/QUEENS. 33333...try confirming illuminati. 
NOOOOOOOO, DON'T DO THAT, BADBADBAD. NO. NO.
 Three Alicorn sisters, three more sisters, wtf...
 I THINK I CRACKED IT.
 WORD, FORM, AND SONG. WTF...a freaking TRIANGLE, DUDE. 
NOOOOOOOO NO TRIANGLES.
And GOD, FOR PETE'S SAKE. FATHER, SON, HOLY SPIRIT.
Then you're tryna' make Andromeda have to do three things...


Pegasister Initiation Ceremony 

--"Do you promise to uphold the ways of the Pegasisters, even at the cost of your sanity?"
"Yes."
"Then I hearby dub thee a true Pegasister."

The little seahorse.
He will have elements from four different creatures: elephant, dragon, seahorse, and horsea. (Name ideas: Fin)
The merpony (Coral Splash, Pearl Diver)

The Gen1 ponies could be the ancestors of the Mane 6.
Gen 1:
Twilight. Unicorn. Pink body, straight white hair with a purple stripe, and purple eyes. Cutie Mark is a bunch of stars.‎
Surprise. Pegasus. White body, curly yellow hair, and purple eyes. Cutie Mark is three purple balloons.
Posey. Earth pony. Yellow body, long pink hair, and aqua eyes. Cutie Mark is three flowers. 
Firefly. Pegasus. Pink body, scruffy blue hair, and purple eyes. Cutie Mark is two lighting bolts.‎
Applejack. Pretty much the same as ever, 'cept she has no hat. ‎
Sparkler. Unicorn. Pale grey-blue body, dark, curled purple hair with a dark pink stripe, and dark blue eyes. Cutie Mark is three gems.‎




Anything related to anything else fan-made is either on purpose (as a reference), or is purely coincidental. My Little Pony belongs to Hasbro Studios. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED


Flurry Heart's original talent.

When someone is angry, she can see a swirl of dark red. Where this anger is directed determines the direction the energy flows. If they are angry at themselves, she can see it move inward. If they are angry at someone else, it rolls off the angry one. 

When an emotion is strong and sharp, it sparks off the pony. When it is deep, it rolls like waves. Uncertainty and fear cause distortion and ripples. 


The brighter and lighter a color, the more happy and optimistic the pony is. 

Sad colors are dark and muted. 

Cool, pastel and neutral colors are calming. 

Strong, bright colors are energizing. 


Colors:

Pink: Youth, romance, sweet, charming.

Red: Passion, love, anger, danger. 

Orange: Vitality, happiness.

Yellow: Laughter, hope, sunshine

Green: Refreshing, health, ideas, inspiration.

Blue: Safety, relax, calm, cold, sadness

Purple: Mystery, creativity, 

Black: Darkness. This can tinge other colors, darkening them. If black is the only color one can see on a creature, they have been swallowed by evil.

White: Purity, light.

Grey: Null, deadened emotion.  



Several ponies demanded to know why they were brought before the king, who declared that every foal should step forward. If they were not compliant, they would come by more harm.  Parents tried to keep their children close but Sombra insisted, stating it was for the good of the Empire, and his soldiers forced the young ones forward. When they all stood in a small huddled group, a crystal cage ensnared them. Pandemonium ensued as their parents rushed forward, intending to save them. A small group Sombra had suspected was planning something attempted to charge him, but was quickly beaten down by the soldiers. Thus distracted, the group did not notice the larger wall of crystals growing around them until it was too late. 

A single trail of shadowflame streamed down from the top of the castle, and entered the cage through the top.

The soldiers stood by, emotionless. Nearby earth ponies cried out and cowered, covering their ears. Those still hiding in their homes, even on the edges of the Empire, could hear the distant wails of agony coming from the center. The screams and lamentation swirled together with the howling of the harsh winter winds just outside their prison. It was a day they would never forget.


Sombra reveled in their despair and sent his soldiers down to escort the revolters. They were put in chains and made to bring him materials he could use to craft better armor. As he sat upon his throne, he recalled the young princess, who was still missing. No matter. Once every single pony was under his control, she would soon be found. 

He heard something. A strange tinkling sound, coming through the castle. A tiny cloud of sparkling magic flew through the doors of the throne room and swirled before the king. It manifested itself into -- a letter. 

He tilted his head in curiosity. As much as he despised ponykind, their magic intrigued him more and more. He took the letter and read it. 

Someone wanted an audience with the present rulers of the Empire. They vaguely implied concern, which amused Sombra. They didn't know the half of what was happening inside his walls of fire. Included in the letter was a detailed description of how to perform the spell to send back a reply. He did so, granting the writer of the letter audience with him in a few days time. He opened a window and sent the letter out, watching it swirl through the air and fade from sight near the towering walls of shadowflame.

---

Celestia and Luna arrived at the Empire at the appointed time. From a distance they could see a strange haze. Soon they stood in shock before the barrier surrounding the Empire, unable to get close to the searing heat. 

The flames rippled and parted like a hoof pushed through a waterfall. Rows of soldiers stood on the other side, forming two lines that the sisters walked through. The crystal castle was dark and imposing, as were all the houses they passed on their way to the castle. The only ponies in sight were the soldiers escorting them.

When they entered the throne room, they saw a dark grey stallion sitting upon the throne. Metal plates covered his forelegs and chest. A red cape was draped across his back. Green light surrounded his red irises. 

Sombra's face darkened as he watched them approach. He asked who they were, and why they had requested an audience. Warily Celestia introduced herself and her sister. They were concerned about the state of the Empire. Sombra implied that perhaps they should keep their noses out of other's business. As they could obviously see, he was doing a fine job of running his Empire. 


After the final destruction of Brywood, Celestia and Luna took the remaining villagers and built a new home together -- the Castle of the Two Sisters. Celestia became the princess of the sun, and Luna of the moon. Unbeknownst to them, they were followed by Moon Spark's shadow, which lurked just out of sight within their new home. 

The dragons fled across the eastern sea, which was later renamed to the Celestial Sea, in honor of Celestia herself. The north and south oceans were named after Luna. The battlefield of the Dragon War became what is known today as Rambling Rockridge. The memory of Brywood faded with time...along with Andromeda, the forgotten sister.


The Crystal Empire had slowly been flourishing in their little corner of the world. Houses made of crystal dotted the grounds around a magnificent castle that pierced the heavens with its sharp spire. Equestrians were integrated into their society, though Alicorns were revered above all others, and given the status of king or queen. 

The mysterious little unicorn filly rescued from the Frozen North, was adopted by the reigning king and queen of the empire, Tanzanite and Alstonite respectively. She was named Nebula, and raised with much love from her adoptive family. As she was being raised, a unicorn colt was training under attendants to the king and queen, to become an attendant himself. Nebula grew up carefree, feeling things quite deeply. Coal was more down to earth.

The two grew up as friends, with Nebula trying to get Coal to have more fun, and Coal trying to keep Nebula from causing trouble with her antics. Over the years the Crystal Ponies began to take notice of the growing cold, and one year marked an unusually cold Crystal Faire. Spirits were low, and some suspected that the power of the Crystal heart was failing. But Nebula discovered that the light and heat of the Crystal Heart could be strengthened through the unity of the Crystal Ponies. Through this discovery Nebula earned her wings, and was decreed to be the successor of the king and queen. 

But Nebula was unsure of herself, having never imagined herself as one day ruling an empire. So Coal comforts and supports her, knowing it is his duty. 

 -☆-

When Sombra had found himself broken and dying in the Pass, someone else found him too. Moon Spark, who had been recovering from the immense energy she had put out destroying half the mountain, found something gleaming under a pile of rubble. She dug it out, producing a massive ruby crystal heart. 

The Nightmare Forces hold some of Lorelei's knowledge and memories, and through this Moon Spark understandood that the heart could be used as an enhancer, a conduit. She took a chunk for herself, and set out in search of more magic to feed upon. 

She came to central Equestria, where Celestia and Luna were building a new home for their new subjects. On the prowl, she lurked on the edges of the growing kingdom, terrorizing the subjects. Star Swirl went out to investigate, finding evidence of something stalking them. He wanted the Equestrians to feel safe in their new home, so he reassured them that there was nothing to fear, and set out to deal with the threat himself. 

What he encountered was a creature unlike any pony he'd ever seen, with ragged hair that floated about her face like a stormcloud. Her round green eyes stared, wide and piercing, right into him. After he gave her his name, she then revealed that he was the brother who left her family behind in those cold mountains, right after she was born. 

She made her move, attempting to steal the magic of the princesses. Luna was heavily exposed to her dark magic, but Star Swirl was able to stop her, and turned her into shadows. 

The Pony of Shadows.

 -☆-

The ponies of Equestria spread themselves out, starting new colonies of their own in different corners of the continent. A trade route was opened with the Crystal Empire. A particular trip from the Castle of the Two Sisters, brought a small trinket to the Empire. The royal family took a fancy to it, and Moon Spark's amulet entered the Crystal Palace. 

Nebula was being prepared for leadership, and in a year or two would be ready to assume control. She was quite nervous at first, and often sought out Coal for his grounded disposition and advice. 


When Coal touched the ruby crystal, the room changed. 

He found himself floating in an endless void, tinged a smoky red shade. When he turned around, he found himself face-to-face with the massive red dragon, King Sombra. He had been trapped here when Moon Spark took a piece of his heart, and had no concept of time passing outside his prison. When he first sees Coal, unfathomable rage fills him, and he attacks the unicorn. But despite himself, he senses an opportunity to return to his former glory. 

He convinces Coal to keep the amulet, 

 -☆-

Celestia and Luna traveled to the Crystal Empire, to meet with the royal family. They had heard stories from the few ponies who'd ventured there, and finally found an opportunity to pay a visit themselves.

But when they arrived, they found their expectations to be far from the truth. Sombra had assumed total control over the Empire, declaring himself king once again. The earth ponies were forced to mine crystals to satisfy his enormous appetite, and some worked night and day with no rest. Others were trained as soldiers, wearing helmets that controlled their will and made them obey Sombra's every command. 

Thus began the battle for the Crystal Empire. Sombra sent his mindless soldiers to defeat the princess, and though they were formidable opponents, even dying in their quest to stop the sisters, they were no match for the power of pureblooded Alicorns. Working together, the sisters overthrew him, and he was turned to shadow.

 -☆-




(quotes from Fallen Tree)

I thought she could help the wizards.

"That's not the only reason, is it? You miss her."

"You don't know where she is. Or if she's even still alive. But the village is, and you can help them, here and now."


(Sombra's backstory)

Alicorns from the distant kingdom of Alidia traveled to Equestria, where they encountered the dragons. They killed Sombra's wife and took her crystal heart, and built the Crystal Empire. Sombra swore revenge against them and all ponykind. He attempted to kill the three alicorn sisters, but when he was defeated, he turned mad. His own subjects violently cast him out, and as he lay dying, he was found by a young unicorn sorcerer named Moon Spark. 

She took the remains of his own crystal heart and placed them in a special amulet. She then hid the amulet in a secret chamber in the throne room of the Crystal Palace, promising Sombra that he would one day be released by one of the Crystal Ponies. 

King of the dragons, until killed by his own subjects due to his bloodthirsty rule. Came back when he possessed Coal.* Came back again a thousand years later, and was defeated. Came back AGAIN, but with much more power -- and was defeated once and for all. Finally. 

Actually NOPE, HE JUST KEEPS COMING BACK, LMAO XD


(Moon Spark's backstory)

She was conceived during the migration to Equestria, and born after the Split that left a group of ponies (including her parents) alone in the Crystal Mountains. 

As a young filly, Moon Spark was isolated from the other ponies in the small mountain village and frequently abused by her parents. There, a piece of the Nightmare Forces found her and chose her as a host. Her parents had not taught her how to use magic, but D) Star Swirl was her brother, and she shared the same raw magical abilities. All the Nightmare Forces had to do was draw upon her unused stores of magic and expand itself. This turned Moon Spark into an unstoppable whirlwind of chaos magic. Lightning destroyed the mountain she once called home, and the Broken Pass was created. This would later be used extensively by modern-day Equestria when traveling to or from the Crystal Empire. Moon Spark herself fell into a deep sleep, to restore her energy. 

When she awoke, she set out into the world, the goal of the Nightmare Forces now her own; to abolish all life. 

In the early stages of her ascension, she found A) King Sombra dying alone. She took the remains of his crystal heart and created the Dragon Amulet, as a means of enhancing her own magic.


The six wizards, including Star Swirl, tried to use Liliane's guidance to restore the sun. And it worked, but was very taxing on the unicorns.

So their time was spent raising and lowering the sun and moon, and taking care of their three small charges.

Celestia, the elder sister, was a mischievous early bird with a love for sweets. 

Luna, the youngest, was more of a trouble maker and could be moody, staying up well past her bedtime. 

Andromeda was the middle foal. She was quiet and sweet, becoming the one to keep her sisters in line, and driven by a strong desire to help others.

When the sun returned, the village knew the dragons would too. So they began training able-bodied stallions, and formed the village guard, to protect the villagers from the viscous dragons. One of these was a unicorn named Fallen Tree, who was stationed at the wizard's home. A joking, charismatic type, he entertained the three sisters and made sure they were well protected. He formed a close bond with Andromeda, who admired his (quirky nature lol)

 -☆-

(NEEDS UPDATING)

Celestia and Luna were learning how to raise and lower the sun and moon. Andromeda felt left out, and these feelings were increased by the longing to see her mother again. So one day she decided, she would set out to find her. Her sisters had duties, and she would not get in the way of that. 

She left a note for them to find, explaining her intentions and asking them not to follow her. But Fallen Tree, whose duty was to protect the sisters, knew she needed someone to follow her. 

She traveled through forests and fields, under clouds that dripped with rainbows, til the Crystal Mountains rose before her. A daunting obstacle, as well as a rumbling one, but she steeled herself and continued on. Fallen Tree was not far behind, and caught up to her as she was venturing up the mountain.

Andromeda had to accept that her mother might never be found. Fallen Tree comforted her, and the two formed an even closer bond than they had before. 

When they finally returned to the village, their arrival was met with joy. But on that same day, the five wizards lost their strength trying to raise the sun, and could no longer perform the task. Celestia and Luna stepped forth, Luna lowering the moon and Celestia raising the sun. Their Cutie Marks now emblazoned on their flanks, they assumed full responsibility of the celestial bodies.

Fallen Tree went to Star Swirl, as the main guardian of the three sisters, and asked for Andromeda's hoof in marriage. Permission was given, and the two were wed.

A long life together they might have had, but something dark loomed on the horizon once more.

-☆-

When the first ponies of Equestria had journeyed from their first home to find a new one, they traveled through the Crystal Mountains. This place was dangerous, and some of their group was separated and became lost in the mountains. The ones who made it out formed the first village of Equestria. The ones who didn't tried their best to survive in the harsh climate, eventually forming a small town that could only just shelter them. The years went by slowly for this small community, especially for a small unicorn filly, daughter of a secluded couple. They had been separated from their son, who had gone on without them to Equestria. The stallion was an abusive sort, discontent with his lot. His daughter Moon Spark was born during the Migration. He mistreated her and she grew up stunted, unable to use magic. She developed a habit of taking things apart and putting them back together, oftentimes creating something new, albeit sinister. 

It was here that the Nightmare Forces, product of Lorelei's dark and wild magic, found a host for itself. Having traveled many leagues across the land, its form was small and weak. But within Moon Spark it sensed the potential for destruction. Once it entered her body, she too, sensed untapped potential within herself.

This was unleashed upon the unsuspecting members of her town, in the form of massive lightning bolts raining down from the sky. Her power was so great, it shattered the mountain, leaving no one but herself alive.

Ironically, this created the Broken Pass, a safer passage through the mountains that would later be used extensively by modern day Equestria. But no one knows the true history of this passage, or the destructive force that created it. 

 -☆-

Negotiations were scheduled between the growing village of Equestria, and the dragons who continued to plunder. But King Sombra, whose anger and hatred towards ponykind had been simmering for years, would not hear what the ponies had to say. He made his move that day, killing the envoys who had come to negotiate -- Princess Platinum, Commander Hurricane, and Chancellor Puddinghead. The Dragon War began. The village guard was expanded and trained to fight against the dragons, and they held out bravely in the face of their fearsome adversaries. With Celestia and Luna's help, they held longer than anyone would have expected. But the dragons were strong, and Sombra's wrath was stronger still. The village could not stand forever. 

Evacuation began on the (time time, like maybe a couple weeks later), as flames consumed the first village of Equestria. The brave guardians, along with Celestia and Luna, held back the nearly unstoppable tide.

Andromeda went with the remaining villagers, along with her husband, and her three barely weaned foals. 

But as she fled, she knew her sisters would not last long against the dragons. Her desire to help them overcame her, and she left her three young daughters and husband.

As she reentered the battle field, Sombra was about to hit her sisters with a massive wave of fire. Flying as fast as she possibly could, all muscles strained to fight gravity, she reached them before the tide of flame, and when it struck her, the battlefield was engulfed in a ball of white.

Celestia and Luna found themselves in a white void, which slowly faded into the real world as their senses came back. Sombra lay on the battlefield before them, wounded and gasping. All the other dragons had fled or perished. Andromeda was nowhere to be seen. 

 -☆-

The dragons fled across the eastern sea, which was later renamed to the Celestial Sea, in honor of Celestia. In the west, the north and south oceans were named for Luna. The battlefield of the Dragon War became what is known today as Rambling Rockridge, and Celestia and Luna started a new home for the remaining villagers, the Castle of the Two Sisters.

But for Fallen Tree and his daughters, they would not get to see this new home. After Andromeda's sacrifice, King Sombra pursued the unicorn and tracked him all the way to the Broken Pass where he collapsed, dying from his wounds. Fallen Tree carried on, meaning to make it through the Frozen North to a safe place, despite being severally wounded himself. He meant to find the empire his wife had briefly mentioned, but could not find it. Unbeknownst to him, one of his daughter slipped out of the protective wrapping he'd placed all three in, and she was lost in the blinding blizzard that forced Fallen Tree to move on. 

The Empire had been closer than he knew, and after he passed by, a platoon of Crystal Guardians surveyed the area. They had much experience with snow, and were making continued investigations of the area after the explosion in the Crystal Mountains. They soon located the tiny lost filly, right on death's door. Using warming spells, they saved her life and brought her to the Crystal Empire.  


Scrapped the Frozen Village


Ancient

In the Frozen Village of the Crystal Mountains, the parents of Star Swirl have another child.

After the mother goes into labor, the father and a small portion of the Migration stays with her, and they are subsequently trapped in the mountains after a fierce storm and an avalanche. Fortunately for them, they were the group tasked with transporting most of the rations, and use these to survive in the mountains far longer than would've been possible otherwise. They cannot leave, for the magic of the few Unicorns present isn't strong enough to break them out of their prison. (This was well before magic began to advance astronomically.)


So, what are is Dahliah doing as a whole in the story? What's her purpose? 
She's looking for her sisters. Everything she sees in the past is an individual story. For example, she can see what happened in TLOTCE, but not in any of the extras unless it physically involves her. 

Ultimately, she wants to free Queen Chrysalis from her prison and change her back. Even if it means manipulating her other sister in order to make that happen.


Queen Lauren's name has been changed to Liliane.


Scrapped original lament:

Woefully, though I observe,

I cannot impede

Wishing for peace does naught

I know this will end

~∆~

One way or another, tears will flow

Blood will spill

Hearts will break

Inevitably, and I would weep for them

~∆~

But tears cannot be shed

My blood already spilled

My heart, broken and mended

~∆~

How does life do this,

This endless circle of change

Are we naught but specks here,

Drifting endlessly through clouded skies?

~∆~

But I see, we are more

I must tell them, but will they hear me?

And what of the blind ones?

Can their eyes be opened?

Will they open their hearts?

Time will tell

~∆~

Through storms of chaos may we ride

From beneath the hills of burden

To fight the rising evil

Together


(ORIGINAL HISTORY SUMMARY)

In Portmanteau, home of the Alicorns, three types of foals can be born.

Unicorns must earn their wings, and are generally stronger magic wielders.

Pegasi must earn their horn, and are usually stronger physically. 

True Alicorns already have both. The birth of an Alicorn is rare, and they are revered by all Portmanteans. 

Once they are weaned, they are taken to the Crystal Garden, where other true Alicorns tend to the crystal trees, and control the sun and moon.

Lorelei was one such Alicorn. However, as she grew older, she became consumed by greed and the desire for power. She stirred up discontent among her fellow keepers, causing some of them to leave. Lorelei then attempted to assume control of both the sun and moon. This created an eclipse that looked like a giant, blood red eye staring down from the heavens, and was observed by all living creatures everywhere. However, she was stopped by the Mantle; the six leaders of Portmanteau, and they resumed control. 

She was stripped of her magic and banished from her homeland. An Alicorn with no magic, all alone in the desolate plains outside Portmanteau, never survives. Lorelei was no exception. 

Since raw magic cannot be destroyed, her magic was sealed in a jar and stored in the caves beneath the central building of Portmanteau. But her magic was terribly powerful, and slowly grew beneath the hooves of the unsuspecting Alicorns. 

The remaining Crystal Keepers were no match against the dark tide that rose from beneath them. Their death marked a dark day across the entire world, for there was no one to raise the sun. The rest of Portmanteau soon succumbed to the unforgiving darkness. And so, the once mighty race of Alicorns was all but lost.

-☆-

The Crystal Keepers who had left due to Lorelei traveled far away from their homeland. They had been shut in their entire lives, always tending to the trees, never once going outside. Now they could see everything, and went where they pleased.

They found a colony of dragons in the midst of a large stretch of land. It was a little chilly, but the dragons kept it warm with their flames. 

The Alicorns had read about dragons, and knew they were fierce in battle, but had not won any against the Alicorns. So they drove the dragons out, claiming the land for their own. Even the great dragon king, standing almost two hundred feet tall, was unable to defeat the invaders. And he was unable to save his wife, who fell in the brutal battle.

So the dragon king and his subjects fled, leaving the Alicorns to their newly claimed land. But without the dragon's fire, they would soon be swallowed by winter winds. They knew dragon hearts, made of pure crystal, were natural conduits for heat. So they built themselves a home made of crystal left over from the dragons, and took the heart of the dead dragon queen to drive away the cold. Thus was the birth of the Crystal Empire.

 -☆-

Before the Fall, a female Alicorn named Liliane took her three daughters and left Portmanteau. Not believing her children were safe there anymore, she intended to find a new home for them.

She arrived in central Equestria, where a large village was slowly growing near a very tall mountain. She met young Star Swirl, an aspiring wizard with great potential. She began to teach him all she knew about magic, leading him to become one of the greatest wizards in Equestrian history. 

But when the dark day came, Lauren knew it could only be because something had happened to the Crystal Keepers. And if they were in trouble, so was the rest of Portmanteau. 

She taught Star Swirl how to raise the sun and moon, and left for her homeland, leaving her three daughters in the care of the Equestrians. She had to go, even if Portmanteau was beyond saving. 

"I came here to deliver my children to a place of safety. Now I must ask that you care for them in my stead. For I go now to battle the darkness that threatens us all, and I will not return. Remember my teachings, for only with them shall the light return."

Five other unicorns came to help Star Swirl, and the females cared for the young fillies. 

-☆-

Sombra, king of the dragons who were driven out, took his subjects to central Equestria. Finding the tall mountain at the center to be very hospitable, they took up residence there. The large village near their new home was far enough away to not be a bother. But most of the dragons, Sombra included, were still sore from their lost battle against the Alicorns. Little by little, they began attacking the village, pillaging and setting houses aflame. The villagers were not happy, and began fighting back. All hostility ceased during the dark day, and the dragons scurried back to their mountain home. 




• If Nebula is Chrysalis, queen of the Changelings, then who are the Changelings? (Answer: They are the result of her being cursed by Sombra.)

Queen Chrysalis is also Queen Nebula. 
After helping her child Cadence escape the Crystal Empire, Sombra finds her, and demands to know where the filly went. She tries her best to keep him from going after them -- she even breaks the Dragon Amulet, preventing him from becoming a dragon once more. But in doing this, she angers Sombra. His magic goes out of control, and he hurts her in an interesting way (I don't know how, but I know that it's like a nuclear bomb).
He traps Nebula in the dungeons below the castle. The only way to get to her is if you go through the door that shows your fears.
Inside this place, a cocoon forms around Nebula, and when she comes out, she is Queen Chrysalis.
Sombra kills Jacinth, which basically kills Nebula, because she just stood there and didn't stop her brother from killing her husband, because she didn't think Coal would ever do something like that. When she helps her kid get away, Sombra gets really mad, and the magic that he uses on her, combined with her prolonged time in the dungeons and her immense feelings of failure, etc, essentially rots her from the inside out. But she doesn't die. She longs to feel love again, so somehow she breaks out. But nothing is what it used to be. So now, she becomes Chrysalis. Also, maybe when she was in the dungeons, she kinda does die. MWUAHAHAHAHA.
Once she becomes Chrysalis, she doesn't know who she is anymore.
All she knows is that she has hungry subjects.


MWUAHAHAHAHA
Lillith. Associated with 'servitude, chaos, retaliation and downright evil.' ‎
Supposedly, Lillith was Adam's first wife before she was thrown out of Eden and replaced by Eve (I dunno what's goin' on there but I'm using it). Also supposedly, the offspring of Lillith and Adam were the evil spirits of the world.
Not only that, but the name comes from the word lilitu, which means 'of the night'. 
OKAY, BUT her name is now Lorelei...I'll keep this for further reference, though.


‎PLOT CHANGE!!!
Lauren won't leave her daughters right away. And maybe, just maybe -- instead of falling in love with a dragon, Andromeda becomes friends with him. 
Okay, so Lauren brings her daughters to Equestria from a far off land, called Portmanteau. As The Brony Notion theorized, Equestrians can't become Alicorns unless there is intervention. If these ponies were going to survive in this newfound land, they would need protection. There would be, for a time, peace for the Equestrians. But evil would stir, and would try to corrupt them.
In Celestia and Luna's old home, much was revered in the way of behavior. And earning ones wings -- or horn, in some cases -- was as normal for these horses as it is to earn ones Cutie Mark, and it could drastically increase ones magical abilities.  
Joy, Faith. Patience, Love. Truth, Vigor. ‎Allegiance, Courage. Selflessness, Goodness.‎ These attributes were instilled in each youngster. 


"Hi Aunt Twilight," she said, grinning from ear to ear. She peered around her to where Spike was standing and waved hello.



Dahliah was assistant to the head librarian-- who was Twilight. So when Twilight was busy being a princess, Dahliah was basically head librarian. She was almost the complete opposite of Flurry Heart; quiet, reserved, somehow able to sit still for hours at a time. Flurry couldn't sit still for two minutes. But as much as she disliked the utter silence of the library, she liked it when Dahliah read to her, and Dahliah was her friend.

Peeking over Dahliah's shoulder, Flurry Heart saw a large, flat stone held in one hoof.

"What's that?" she asked, tilting her head to the side. 

Dahliah set the stonedown on the table with the utmost care before answering. "Did you hear about the archeological excavations in Rambling Rockridge?"

"No."

"Well, some archeologists went digging in the area. Y'know what they found?" (Other less substantial remains were found, then digging began, to discover more.)

"What?"

"Remains of an ancient village."

"Really? Wow, what kind of village?"

Dahliah laughed. "You know, just a village, silly." She touched the book in front of her with a hoof. "They found this while they were digging. Here, look closely." 

Stepping closer to the stone, Flurry Heart saw strange lines crisscrossing the surface. "What's that?" she breathed.

"That is Old Ponish. I volunteered to translate it." 

"Can you read it to me when its done?" Flurry asked.

"We'll see," Dahliah said with a smile, settling down in a chair. "If it's an undertaker's journal you'll have to ask your parents first."

Flurry Heart's eyes widened, and she gazed at the stone with newfound curiosity. Her right ear twitched down, then up, and her left ear mimicked the motion. She leaned closer until she was peering down her nose, which was practically touching the stone. Beside her, Dahliah raised a single eyebrow, then reached out a hoof and gently pushed the young mare back. 

"Go on Flurry, I'll let you know when it's done. Go spend your energy outside."

"So go *back* outside. Okay, but tell me when it's done!" Flurry raced out the door, throwing the last words over her shoulder.

"I said I will!" Dahliah called after her. She shook her head and resumed reading.


"I finished the translations. Want to read it with me?"

"Is it interesting?"

"It's very interesting, and quite old. I believe this dates back to when Equestria was first founded. "

"No way!"

"It's also a little dark, but it's up to you if you want to hear it."

"Dark? Well just skip the parts that are too scary, ok?" 

"Let's sit down here, it's near the window. You ready?"

"Uh huh, go ahead."

"Okay." Dahliah sat down carefully in a chair with the stone slate. "I couldn't figure out who wrote this, but it had to have been an inhabitant of the village. It's called "Del Darken Marung," which translates to "The Dark Morning."



I write this by the light of mine own horn. A calamity is upon us. The pale face of the moon has turned dark, the sun nowhere to be seen. Why does it slumber still?

We've but only just arrived, nary but a few dwellings erected in this land. 

Nay...I behold the sun with mine own eyes, but tis red, red as newly spilled blood. It rises beneath the moon. Everything is stained red. Tis an eclipse...the sun and moon stare down from the heavens akin to the divine eye of some most awesome beast, as if judging us all. 


Seven days have not yet passed since the Red Eye, and woe, the sky is dark once more. May this be an omen? Art we be trespassers in this land?

Six wizards have joined together. I know not yet what is is they plan to do, but I hope it is for the good of all of us. 

They are combining their magic. There is a light over the horizon...the sun has risen.

Some believe we should not be meddling in what should be outside of our control. But the young Star Swirl expressed that is was Liliane's desire that this be done. He was taught by her. Indeed, he seems to be surpassing the magical abilities of almost everypony in the village, even Clover the Clever. 


Nopony has seen The Pony of Shadows for some time, but this blessing is tainted by the disappearance of the Pillars. They swore they would protect us from evil. Now who will our saviors be?


I inscribe the name of the day I began this documentation, and bury it so it may be safe in days to come. Time walks on without us, we are already lost in the past. 

A day is but a drop falling into the sea of time, and we are all caught in that single bead.


"Star Swirl is in there?"

"That's right. I could hardly believe it myself when I translated his name."

"Who's Liliane?"

"I don't know. Maybe a mage in the village. It doesn't really go into detail about the other inhabitants."


"Wasn't Star Swirl taught by Clover the Clever?"

"That's what is written. If we ask him, not only will it determine the validity of this tablet, it will call into question what we think we know about history."

Flurry Heart gaped openly at the stone tablet. 



(og)

When Coal blinked, the room changed. He was no longer standing before the shelf that held the gemstone.

Instead, he found himself floating, and all around him was an endless void tinged a dark, smoky red. Indeed, the air seemed to be made of smoke, for Coal's eyes began to water and sting, and he coughed on the choking air. 

He felt a hot rush of air from behind, whipping his mane forward into his eyes. Brushing it away with a hoof, he turned around, and found himself looking into a large, black oval. Around it was a pattern of reds, oranges and yellows, creating a brilliant sphere that stared menacingly at him. It blinked, then rose up into the smoke, higher than a stones throw, higher than a pegasus could fly. A second one joined it, bathing the stallion in an unnatural yellow glow. He sensed an enormous presence before him, which rumbled and heaved.

The two eyes stared, and Coal felt his whole body trembling. A rumbling started in front of him, traveling all the way up towards those eyes. Then it came out.

"A pony," came a voice, vibrating Coal's inner ear. It was low and powerful. "In my domain. Where did you come from?"

Coal's voice quavered as he attempted to speak. "Uh, ahem -- I touched your gemstone, and now I appear to be -- here."

The blazing eyes blinked slowly, regarding him with disdain. "Gemstone, you say?" The creature seemed to contemplate something for a moment, then a look of anger narrowed the eyes. (Sombra realizes he can see through Coal's mind into the outside world. What he sees is a room probably, in which is the chunk of his heart. ) "It has been decimated...who is responsible for this?" 

Confused, Coal drew his hooves up before him protectively. "What has? What do you mean?"

"It's you ponies again. Always meddling and taking what does not belong to you!" The eyes sped towards him, and a huge mouth came through the mist, opening wide to show huge teeth as long as Coal was tall. Terrified, he cried out and rolled to the side, and the jaws slammed shut mere feet from where he floated before. The air rumbled as the jaws slid backwards into the darkness.

"You cannot escape me. This is MY domain, trespasser." He looked up into those terrifying eyes as they blinded him.

"I don't know how I got here! I did not mean to trespass, I'm sorry!" Coal pleaded desperately with the enormous creature. 


Dear Sunset Shimmer, 
Things have really changed around here. I found a book in the Crystal Empire, and that's where change started. A new pony arrived, we reformed Queen Chrysalis, Starlight Glimmer -- well, she isn't who we thought she was. 
  But the most surprising change was what happened to the Elements. The Elements of the Pillars, and of Harmony, fused together to create the New elements. These have their own bearers...which means we aren't the bearers anymore. I'm not. Which is hard on all of us. But...it may be for the best, that there are new elements. New bearers.


Original synopsis for TLOTCE. 

Why are none of the Crystal ponies willing to speak about the time they were ruled by King Sombra? Trying to find out frustrates Twilight so much, ‎she doesn't question the mysterious pony who finally gives her what she wants.


What would Moon Spark's father do for a living? He's a rude bastard, obviously. Moon goes out while a storm is raging (stupid, I know), and does something...why do I keep thinking about sheep...why would her father herd sheep...FINE, HE CAN HERD F***ING SHEEP.

Ah, no. They're eking out an existence on top of a frozen mountain. His occupation is rude bastard.


Important 
The new elements are formed in Time Whispers, and Flurry Heart is found to be the fourth element in Incarnate. Anything that says otherwise needs to be rectified.
Another important goal:
Since TLOTCE is supposedly the first story you would put out, you need to finish it.


Lorelei is the only one who knows the decay spell.


The little rock that (someone, how about Stygian?) gives to Moon Spark as her token is also Maud's Boulder. 
Moon Spark throws the pebble away, not wanting to keep a thing of the past. Over a thousand years later, little Maud Pie is working in the rock fields during a rainstorm. She kicks her hoof a little, and kicks Boulder out of the mud.


Coltlantis. Freaking Coltlantis with kelpies.
Oh, and Seaquestria/Hippogryphia, with Hippogryphs.


I think the dragons and ponies would be courteous towards one another, until they find reasons to hate.

But if they were at least courteous towards one another, what would be the point in banishing the dragons?
Maybe the princesses were so full of grief for their sister, they just wanted to get rid of them. Plus, perhaps Sombra was encouraging the dragons to pillage and burn.
We also need some prejudice in here. 
Maybe the sisters heard things about the dragons, ponies saying that they're nothing but trouble. Andromeda doesn't believe this. 


It was during one of these lessons that the other five wizards lost their magic completely, and were unable to raise the sun. 

Little Celestia stepped up, ignited her horn, and brought the sun over the horizon, earning her cutie mark.

Luna soon followed suit, taking control of the moon.

Andromeda bridged the new gap between them. Celestia was now the only one up for whole days, while Luna stayed up all night. Little Andromeda was up for half a day, and was asleep half the night. Sunset was now the one time all three of them were together. 

-☆-

Now that the sun had returned, life went back to normal for the rest of the village. Anticipating the return of the dragons, the village guard was formed, training some of the young able-bodied stallions to keep their home safe. One such stallion was Fallen Tree, a unicorn. Friendly and entertaining, he was stationed near the wizard's home and immediately tried to make friends with the three young mares living there. He and Andromeda took a liking to each other, and ye olden word for "hung out" whenever possible. 

Andromeda confessed to him that, though the memories were hazy, she missed her mother and desperately wanted to see her again. This desire had been festering for some time, until Andromeda finally decided she wanted to go and find her. Fallen Tree tried to talk her out of it, but she was going to go on her own if she had to. 

(Andromeda goes with her sisters) 

She told this to her sisters, and Celestia was immediately interested. Luna was a bit wary, so Andromeda suggested they ask Fallen Tree to come along. When they tell him what they want to do, he agrees to go with. Since he's not the only one guarding the house, and he is specifically in charge of the mares, he figures its his duty to accompany them.   

 Andromeda left a note for their caretakers, explaining where they were going and why. The four ponies left in the middle of the night, when they were less likely to be discovered. They set off in the direction Andromeda had seen Lauren last -- towards the Crystal Mountains. 

Andromeda, along with her sisters and Fallen Tree, set out to find Lauren. 


• Why, exactly, does Tiger Eye make a book?

(Discussion: Maybe she doesn't. If Dahliah is visiting the Empire, then she'll probably see the past. By use of Magic! In the Plot. Twilight finds her and Dahliah tells ‎her about the Empire's hidden history. Maybe Twilight went there to read up on their history, but finds nothing. Except for Dahliah, whom she bumps into. She tries to extract information from the Crystal ponies, but they are unwilling to tell her anything. Heading back to the library, Twilight figures she can go to the sisters and ask them, but then Dahliah finds her.)


• Why does Coal curse Ruby Spinel? How does the curse work?
(Discussion: I'm looking at curses right now -- there's this one that's like, the curse of the 'evil eye' or something. A curse transmitted through a malicious glare. Coal definitely glared at Ruby before he cursed her (oh and that fear-stare-thingamagigy he keeps doing). But what effect would the curse have?
Tearing her apart from the inside out is what I keep coming back to. OR, since he does that fear-stare-thingamagigy in the 9th season, maybe that is a lower level version of what he does to Ruby.)


‎Soror is Latin for sister.

You say that in the story, whomever hears Umbra say soror hears it as 'sodor', which is Hungarian for drift.


I think that, shortly after giving birth to Tempest, Dahliah and Nebula -- Tiger Eye should die. Then, () has to figure out what to do with you guys. You'll die soon, too, if you don't get milk. But Sombra finds out about the three little fillies, and becomes enraged. The ponies of the Crystal Empire help defeat the dragons, and so, this once proud race retreats to what are now known as the Dragon Lands.
My name is now officially Dahliah. :D


Dahliah could wield every element. She shows strong loyalty, and tries to be honest. She's known for her laughter, and holds out hope. She is kind, and wants to heal others. She's strong, and brave. And she gives without expectation, and -- is cute? Hehheh, kinda stopped the train...
Now I REALLY want a story where she holds all of them. Oooooh -- OOOOOOH -- getting ideaaaaaas!
Y'know, different dimensions and stuff. She steals all of the Elements, and meets up with the moon-guys. Member them??? 
Thinkin, thinkin...
Dahliah goes by the tree. The tree's like, hey, she encompasses every single Element. But that would be way too much power for one pony. So why not give the others to her sisters, and the one sister's daughter? Quite the strange group. 
The tree was trying to distribute the power. ‎It looked at her, went, "Oh wow, she can possess every element, that's kinda scary. Let's nooot give her all of them, let's give some to her sisters and niece."


Twilight has a moment where ponies are looking to her for help, and she is up for the challenge. But when her plan fails, her confidence fails, as well. She believes that all those other times when she took charge and succeeded were just strokes of luck or something, and now she was facing things beyond her control. 

"No! I can't help any of you! I'll just fail you!"


This'll show up on Lorelei's jar. It's Hebrew --

שלוש יהיו תמיד ארבע
בחיים, באהבה, במוות
והצללים ייקחו
אלה שנפגעו על ידי מגע שלהם
For this:
Three will always be four
In life, in love, in death
And the shadows will take
Those affected by their touch


Used to call the Alicorns "Alicornai"


Since Star Swirl used to help raise the sun or something -- perhaps, instead of Moony and Star Swirl being siblings, Star Swirl and Stygian are. And they both admire Moony, and as such conflict with each other.

Okay, his mother used to live with him -- wherever he is when he was raising the sun. Then he was raising the sun, so she moved to the mountains. Ha. 
Star and Stygian won't be related, then. Going back to Moony and him being sibs.


Maybe the New Elements should get the Elements in Incarnate, rather than Revival. You could show the Elements as losing their power, so that when Lorelei comes, they can't be used, making draaaaaamaaaaaaaaa, heeheehee.


So, I've thought about it -- and I've decided to keep the my-OC-has-Tirek's-rainbow-of-darkness line. But 'Kilo Paradoxia' is a lame name. 

(Hehehe, lame-name)
Since you have a good name for your OC, it shouldn't be too hard to come up with a villain name...right?
DEATH FLOWAH
No.
Aww...
Datura? Poisonous flower. It also mentioned something called jimsonweed. I kinda like that one. :) Or Night Shade. Or Solanum. Atropa. 
What, am I supposed to look each of these up? 
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH, NIGHT SHADE. 
Well, la-dee-freakin'-da.
I'M A VILLAIN, YO, TAKE THAT, AND THAT, AND --
Would you shut up already? Jeez, just because you get to be a villain that doesn't mean you have to be weird about it.
(sigh) Fine...
Change of plans -- Starlight is Lorelei reincarnated, and will be the villain for this one.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...
Oy, you could always make an entirely separate story where you're the villain. 
Okey-pokey! :D 
*sigh* You're so difficult...
I enjoy being difficult. :D
How does one describe a dark rainbow?
Out of the pouch shot a stream of shadowed colors, with beams of natural rainbow spectra threaded through. It sped towards the tree, making contact with the trunk with a dull crackling sound. A shimmering darkness enveloped the crystal tree, bleeding outward to the branches, and the Elements embedded in them.
Woah-ho-ho, that's pretty rad. X)
Your OC has Tirek's Rainbow of Darkness. She goes to the Tree of Harmony and unleashes the Rainbow upon it. It takes the Elements and the tree, and transforms them into a crown. When you put it on, the combination of dark magic, light magic, and the Elements warps you into a monster. 
Since you have both dragon and celestial blood in you, it takes both of those elements into account. 
The Element of Magic rests where a horn would be on your head, and serves as your source of magic.
I could be a weird combination of Jigsaw, Loki, blah blah blah.
A.K.A: . Dahliah.
( I'm gonna keep this, just in case.)


MWUAHAHAHAHA

She was the mate of Alberich, and even had kids with him, but she was cast out of Portmanteau when her children appeared to be...unusual. Those children eventually became the Umbrum.
Further mwuahahaha 
Samel. Regarded as both good and evil, he will have a somewhat neutral personality. 
Maybe he could also be Umbra. Umbra can be five hundred feet tall.


MWUAHAHAHAHA 

If I was told someone could move the sun and moon, I would be afraid of that person. In fact, I would need to be thoroughly convinced that they mean to protect the sun and moon or something, before I would trust them.
The Alicorns will bide their time, until Discord shows up. Then they'll defeat him, and show the Equestrians that they mean no harm.
There also has to be motive...for Lauren to bring her daughters to Equestria. 
Okay, so Lauren sees that the Equestrians might need protection. The Alicorns, however, are aloof and feel they should not interfere with pony matters. Lauren tells them that the fate of the Equestrians could affect the Alicorns. And so they give, and allow Lauren to travel to Equestria with her daughters. (Just remember that at least some of the Alicorns could be on Lauren's side.)


Einstein's theory thing, I guess: If you have an object, it warps space/time. If you add another object, it also warps space/time. They feel that, and they are attracted to each other. 

Objects warp space/time, feel that curvature, and move accordingly.
So maybe, you could use this for the 'moon siblings' thing.
The moons of Uranus.
Umbriel. The darkest of this planet's moons. Most prominent feature is the silvery crater Wunda. (Name suggests Umbra!)
Titania. The largest moon. The name is of Greek origin. 
Ariel. The brightest moon. It's name refers to a sylph in one of Shakespeare's plays, and ‎a spirit in the play The Tempest. (Me!)
Oberon. A king of fairies in one story, and of elves in the next. Name means 'noble and bear-like'
I'm thinking something like this:
"Hello, moon sister."
So, perhaps there are special ponies out there, ponies who have been...‎I don't know, Moon Spark did something to them somehow. They are moon siblings. I represent Ariel, respectively, but...who are the other three?
So, you can see through time, and are capable of wielding every single Element...who are the other three?
Hmmm...an unusual individual...


It's said that Cadence is a very distant relative of the first ruler of the Crystal Empire -- Princess Amore. A picture of Amore shows her turned into a black stone statue, and a scene in a comic book shows her speaking with Shining Armor in some caves. 

Hmmm...
Maaaybe.....instead of having Nebula.....Tiger Eye has Amore? 
That wouldn't make sense with the timeline, though. Amore was the first ruler of the Empire. The Empire helps get rid of Sombra. 
Okay...so if Cadence is distantly related to Amore...and she's also a descendant of Andromeda...
Perhaps 'distantly related' doesn't have to actually mean related. Amore could have been Cadence's babysitter, or something, and said "Mi amore Cadenza."‎
Here's another thought: Why would Queen Chrysalis say I love Cadence?
Maybe Andromeda had Amore, instead of Tiger Eye. Or maybe with Tiger Eye. 
So like this: She has Amore, and she goes off to the Crystal Empire, where she is made the queen. Why? Because she's the offspring of royalty. Then Andromeda has Tiger Eye, and right around this time is when things start happening. So at this point, a good couple of years have passed. Enough for Amore to grow up a bit, then become the first Crystal princess.


Maybe Moon Spark's mane was nice and smooth, but when she started goin' crazy, it spiked out due to the electricity.

Also, I think TSOMS should be able her hunting her father, and the side story should be about her making stuff like the Alicorn Amulet and Inspiration Manifestation.


(NEEDS UPDATING)
OK, OK, so, blue book? Maybe only those who are related to Tiger Eye can see her, and can read the book. Twilight is...very distantly related to her, so maybe what she sees is a weak apparition.
Maybe a part of Tiger Eye's spirit is in the little book, and that's why her eyes appear. Or maybe, instead of just her eyes appearing, a ghostly form of her appears.

Dahliah follows the lives of each of her ancestors, wanting to know everything about them. They eventually lead her to her real mother, where she unintentionally passes on all the information she had gathered (Mostly the TLOTCE stuff, though). ‎

So y'know you had a scene where Twilight opens the book and Tiger Eye's -- eyes -- pop up, right? Which wouldn't necessarily make any sense if she's dead...so! Perhaps she imbues her soul in the book.
Okay, so if she did that, then...what happens?


New development: Solidago is uh, I think Latin, for Goldenrod. This plant is part of the -- you guessed it -- Asteraceae family. 

Perhaps, that yellow dragon you dreamed about could be Solidago.


This'll be a journey for Twilight, too. After all, she's the one who found the book in the first place.

She finds the book, finds out about the Empires' true history, then goes to talk to Luna about it.
Hmm...where exactly is Celestia at that point?
Well, she's got three stories until she becomes Daybreaker. Wait...do we really need a story where Celestia becomes Daybreaker? 
Uh...I'll have to think about that...
Y'know what...I don't think so. I suppose I could make it an extra, though.
$/!?, then there's six stories. 
I need a compilation of every time I've been mad about this...


Sombra's wife should have been purple. And that's where the purple in Tiger Eye comes from.


Waaaaah, can't the Elemental Crown come in SOMEWHERE? I mean, look at this! 

 I think...when people get all wrapped up in how they want to change the world, they'd trying to apply their own vision -- and it might not work out. They don't realize the problems they are causing elsewhere. They may not even realize exactly how they are affecting the things they try to fix.
 What happens when a single pony tries to wield all of the Elements?
 Well, what happens when too many people are conflicting? Too many people trying to help (is that even possible?), and they get in each other's way.
 "This power -- it's so beautiful! I can do so much more now, I can help everyone, like I always wanted!"
 She raised her hooves to her head, amazed by the absolute power, and aimed the opaque horn at the tree.
 "I can fix the tree!" she cried. "I'll make things better, I promise!"
 A beam of translucent light zapped the tree. The blackened bark shone silver, and then dissolved. 
 The Mane Six gasped. "Where's the tree?!" Fluttershy cried.
 "What are you doing?" Twilight yelled. "Don't you see what you've done?!"
 "You won't need the tree any more -- I'll protect you!" she declared.


I'm trying to come up with the mare who sees Sombra get rid of Alstonite and Tanzanite. 

Gems: The Black Prince's Ruby,
How about Ruby Spinel? Or Ruby Thorn, because of Latin spina, which means thorn. ‎I don't knoooooow.....D'X
Sam says he likes Spinel. Yeah, I do too. :) But maybe her Cutie Mark will have something to do with thorns.
Ruby Spinel is the mare who sees Sombra get rid of Alstonite and Tanzanite. He hears her gasp outside the door, and teleports in front of her when she runs. He places a curse upon her; if she tries to tell anyone what she saw, ahh...hmm, maybe she'll die?
But hanging. 
He doesn't Have to hang ponies if he can just kill them on the spot.
But he hasn't done that yet, has he? Is he capable of doing so?
With the amount of power he has, definitely yes.
But...
No buts, and no hanging! 
Fine. >:\

The reason why Ruby's curse activates in the end is because she's a Unicorn; and will therefore die.


(NEEDS UPDATING, cause the Spirit Blade AND UMBRA are no longer in this story )

You need to figure out...what exactly happened to Moon Spark.
Okay, so she made the Spirit Blade. Then mister-death-guy showed up saying how proud he was of her. Then she got turned into the pony of shadows. Maybe he says that...she is now just like him. So now she goes out to haunt all of Equestria. 
But why is Umbra recruiting random ponies like this? If all he sees at the beginning of time is pain and destruction -- does he also see that he himself is the cause of it? 
I'd say, no. Him and Claridade, when they have their visions of the future, it's more like...a feeling. Fleeting images. Umbra feels this, but is not aware that he is the cause of it all. 
So then, why would he be the reason everything goes south?
Well, maybe he knows it is meant to be. 
Do we really have to explain why?
Yes, because if I question his motives, and I myself don't really know why he's doing this ("He's a villain, therefore his actions are justified!), then the readers won't see him as a genuine villain. ‎


Maybe, the 'mysterious stallion'...could be Star Swirl's and Moon Spark's father. 
AAAAAHHHHH
So, if her father is the same pony she imprisons in the Blade, then...
She tried to kill him, but he got away! She chases after him, trying to find him, destroy him. Her punishment for him is to be trapped in the Blade. 
Why does she mess around with Star Swirl's stuff, then?
Hmm..Star Swirl tries to stop her, reason with her. Her magic infects the Amulet. And if she is connected to Inspiration Manefestation, then maybe there's also a connection between that book, and Tiger Eye's book.

The new six need a name. 

Cosmic six?
The...the...ooh, what's that one word...ugh. 
Traits...
For now, just the New Elements.


Honestly, even though I say this is scrapped, this could be how everything began.

Alrighty! I've got a doozy of a story idea here 

for you.
How do I myself pronounce these names, you ask?
Claire-ih-daid
Oohm-bruh
 At the beginning of time, there were two beings.
 Claridade, of the light.
 Umbra, of the shadows. 
  They were separate, and yet they were one. Together they formed the land that would be known as Equestria. They made all of the creatures that roam free. They are history, and yet they are the future. 
 They foresaw what the land newly formed would eventually come to be. Claridade was overjoyed by the light and happiness. 
  Umbra only saw the destruction, the lies. The pain.
 He did not want to give intelligence to the creatures of the future. They did not deserve the chance to be more than animals. 
 Claridade thought otherwise. She saw what the ponies, the dragons, and all the creatures, big and small, would be able to do if they only had a chance. ‎She pleaded despairingly with Umbra, asking him to help her give them new life. 
 He refused.


At the start, the evil guy will be Antumbra. Then, he'll be Penumbra. And Then he'll be Umbra. OR, Sombra could technically be one (f**k YES), and then...something else.

Also, him and Death could be one and the same.
"They saw only what they wanted to see. Their bedtime stories depicted me as a skeleton wrapped in shadows.
 "Well...they got part of it right." *chuckle*


  New elements. Wielded by a new group.

  Okay, I've got the group together. 
  Tempest Shadow, Dahliah, Flurry Heart. Nebula.
 "Way too much purple," Rainbow said, smirking. 
 "I like it," Pinkie Pie said with a giggle. "They all match!"
 "Girls, are you sure this is what's supposed to happen?" Twilight interjected, glancing worriedly at the three purple mares.

 "Woah...that's a lot of purple," Rainbow Dash muttered. 
 "I like it," Pinkie Pie giggled. "They all match!"
 "B-b-but...there's no way these guys should have the Elements! I mean, look at them!" Twilight protested, waving a hoof towards the group of misfits.
 "Twilight, if the Elements have to be held by them, then we just have to accept it," Applejack said. 
 "Darling, would you say that we were any more prepared than them to wield the Elements against Nightmare Moon?" Rarity asked. "We were no more than a group of misfits ourselves when we defeated her."


MWUAHAHAHAHA

By making his parents disappear, Coal ensures that the Crystal ponies, and Nebula, believe that there's something out there, threatening them. They don't think to look right under their noses, which is where Sombra is.
Also, his influence when Sombra is controlling him; he doesn't want to kill anyone, like Nebula, even though at times it would be incredibly easy. But Sombra wants to kill these ponies, so he nudges Sombra in the direction of Jacinth, instead.
Question: Why wouldn't they look right under their noses? 
Answer: Because trouble is virtually nonexistent for them. The Empire is well known for its love. Why would anyone cause any trouble?


Maybe, after you kinda go crazy, they cart you off to an asylum. Or, you broke out of an asylum and Then you did your thing. Yeah, latter is better.


"There's something -- off -- about that mare. She seems like a different pony every time I see her."
 "Oh, come on, Twilight!"
 "But she hasn't even told us her name!"
 "Really, Twilight, you're makin' a big fuss over nothin'!"
 "Yeah, Twilight, 'She seems like a different pony every time I see her!'" Rainbow quoted mockingly.

There were dark shadows beneath her eyes, and she walked on shaky legs.
 "Are you feeling alright?" Twilight asked, concerned. The mare looked at Twilight, and smiled. 
 "Yeah, I'm fine. Just had a tough time falling asleep last night -- if I don't sleep right, I look messed up in the morning," she said matter-of-factly.
 "OK, well, if you need anything, just let me know," Twilight told her.
 "Sounds good," the mare said brightly.  

 "For years, I wandered through time, trying to find my past, and learn my identity," the mare said quietly.

The pupils of her eyes sharpened, became diamond-shaped.

 The darkness was impenetrable. Twilight tried to ignite her horn, but it did not work. She couldn't hear anything, either -- until the mare spoke.
 "I've always been alone."
 As she spoke, a dull red glare filled the dark void. In the middle of it was the mare.
 "I loved to play with the fillies and colts as a young foal. We always came up with such good games. They got better and better as time went on...though I didn't play with the same foals all the time. It was all so confusing -- I would play with the local kids for a few days, and then the next thing I knew...they weren't there anymore."
 The light flickered, throbbed.
 "I felt my heart fracture each time it happened. Sadness, loneliness, confusion...these things were all I knew for a time."
 The light slowly turned blue.
 "Then I woke up to a different world each day. I would fall asleep in a shack, and wake up on a mound of dirt. 

"After a while, I finally figured out what was happening. Then I could control it. And now I could look for my past, discover who I was."
  Sickly yellow light emanated from the mare.
 "To think, I am related to the Alicorn princesses? And that they killed their own sister? And did not want my mother, and drove the dragons away from this land--" The light was red again, a burning scarlet. "It was sickening. So much so that I forgot to be careful. I was found appearing in another time by some snotty ponies, and they surrounded me with a whole group, calling me freak, and throwing things at me." The mare rubbed at her face angrily. "Then some weird stallions in suits showed up, and carted me off to what they called an 'asylum'. There was strong magical protection around that place...it prevented me from escaping by means of time travel.

 "I'm much older than you think. I was born centuries ago. 

 "I can't imagine going through that for as long as you did..." Twilight murmured, eyes lowered. "Friends are precious, and losing them can hurt more than it needs to." She raised her head and looked at the mare. "But now that you know how to control it, you can choose to make friends, and keep them. And if you want, it can start with me and my friends." The mare looked up, eyes wet, as Twilight reached a hoof out to her.
 "What do you say?"
  
 The mare galloped to Twilight and threw her hooves around the Alicorn. Surprised, Twilight stood silent for a moment, before wrapping her own hooves around the mare.