Mio
1: "I'm ugly." 2: "Pft, I'm ugly too, but you don't hear me complaining about it." 1: "Except, you're not ugly." 2: "Yeah right. I'm pretty sure my bags have bags under my eyes, and I dress like a slob." 1: "I like the way you dress. It keeps you from looking like a self absorbed prep." 2: "Pft. Whatever, idiot."
Can you see any of your characters saying this to each other? Write about it!
Mine:
"I'm ugly." Chocolate says from her place in the grass beside me.
I stare up at the sky above us, shaking my head. "Pft, I'm ugly too, but you don't hear me complaining about it."
"Except, you're not ugly, Masukermeron." She counters.
"Yeah right. I'm pretty sure my bags have bags under my eyes, and I dress like a slob." I say, laughing slightly as my gray fox tail swishes in amusement.
She sits up to look at my face, shaking her head. "I like the way you dress. It keeps you from looking like a self absorbed prep." She scratches behind one of her neko ears casually.
"Pft. Whatever, idiot." I say, sitting up and lightly shoving her.
She pretend falls over back into the grass. Jeez… Stop being adorable when I can't be with you… You're such a tease without knowing…