forum Would you like to join me in reading along as I write, and giving suggestions?

Started June 25, 2019 by @Echo_6 group

tune

This is the rough draft I'm working on right at the moment if you want to join me on this endeavor.

This is an awesome story!

Thank you, I'm open to critique at any time as well as suggestions if you think it might make the story flow better.

There are a few spelling errors but I'll give you a better critique in the morning because its 1 am here and my brain has stopped working lol

Yeah, I should go to bed as well. It's not one here but it is midnight.

Lol

This could take a long time for me to finish but I hope that when I'm done with this rough draft I'll be able to write the final draft and then get it published.

I'd be excited to read this if it got published

That gives me much more confidence in getting it published. I just gotta make sure to write it in a way that helps people like some characters, love some characters, dislike some characters, hate some characters and loathe a few of the characters.

i started editing but ill do the rest later. hope you find it helpful!

Thank you!

@"The Grammar Queen" welcome to the place where I write.

Oh, hey!

I've started giving some suggestions~~

I have to go for now, but I will try to keep editing soon! Love it so far!

Thank you!