Hey guys, I just finished the prologue of my webcomic that I posted on webtoons
https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/corrupted/list?title_no=196701
I was wondering if you guys would check it out and tell me what you think of it so far (there isn't much to it yet, but any tips or opinions are appreciated!)
Bro.
Or sis, whatever– I call everyone Bro :)
It's amazing!!!
Idea: Bring in someone who has survived this whole attack so far. Like, one of the original survivors who teamed up with the rest and tried to fight off the species together. Maybe bring one in, and really try to explain how he/she has fought harder than imaginable because of one thing they live for.
If you don't want to, it's ok :)
I honestly think It's amazing. The ending where she says she's lived with them her whole life? Goals.
@Celestial-B this is do good! I love your art style, it's so pretty. I concur with @grammarqueen4—the ending line is perfect. This prologue is great and it really makes me want to read more :)
@alice Right?!?
@Celestial-B Keep me posted on this one!
@Celestial-B Keep me posted on this one!
Me too!
Ah, sorry for the late reply xD
@"The Grammar Queen" Omg i'm glad you like it!! :D That is a good idea! I might use it if I can find a place to add it into the story :3
@alice Thank you!! I'm also happy you like it! Sure! I think i'll be posting the next one on Monday.
I’m going to follow this! I have WEBTOON and I love this!
@FireSky GAh, thank you! :DDD That made me rrly happy lol
Ah, sorry for the late reply xD
@"The Grammar Queen" Omg i'm glad you like it!! :D That is a good idea! I might use it if I can find a place to add it into the story :3
@alice Thank you!! I'm also happy you like it! Sure! I think i'll be posting the next one on Monday.
Yay! :D