forum Thoughts on These
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tune

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@SupernaturalSyGuyIsTIred group

Hey fellow writers. I wrote two very short poems, which I don't really do; I mostly write stories, but do have an appreciation for poetry. Anyway, I was wondering what y'all think about them.

Midnight Moon
People in a room,
All of them sealed to their doom.
They will die soon,
But not before the midnight moon.

Pain
This abysmal rain,
it matches the sound of my pain.
I try to run,
but I can't escape from it hun.
Now I'll let my blood run down the drain.

@Tiani

they are vague, but in a good way, it let's the imagination run wild with ideas. I think this would be a great writing prompt/inspiration. If you enjoy it you should write more.