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Lmao just kidding. I'll keep this going for a while, so don't worry.
I reworked the prologue after a while of procrastinating. I think it turned out tons better than the first one I wrote, mainly because things make more sense, I guess. So if you have the sudden urge to give it a reread, I won't stop you.
Here's the updated link.
The Darkness Within - Prologue (The Praying Princess)
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But I need an opinion on something. After rereading the prologue and several of the earlier chapters, I realize that a TON of work needs to be done on multiple aspects – plot, character development, and other things too. I was wondering, would it be best to go back and clean up things and add things as best as I can, or should I just keep chugging onward with the plot and write chapter 19? The thing about progressing through chapter 19 is that down the line, there will eventually be parts of the story that don't make sense because certain aspects are missing that I didn't include earlier, but decided to include it in future edits.
About going back and reworking stuff, it may be a while before any "new" content is released (aka, chapter 19)
So I was wondering what I should do.