I wanted to share some songs I wrote, and let others do the same?
Rules:
Please give meaningful, thought out feedback on someone before you before you post your own song, if you do
Feedback should be positive, unless someone states they're looking for a critique
(Which I'm not, btw ^^ I just want to hare a few things I'm proud of :)
Anyways, these songs are from my fantasy story, so yeah
Travellers Song:
And I put my feet to the world, O explore where you will
Never falter through wind or weather, never be still.
For it is my wish to travel among thee
it is my wish to find where land touches sea
and may my journeys never lead me home.
Lost in a land of rivers and wood
lost to the want to find the last who are good
O, you and I and they are those and they
the good are found near my heart, they say
And I look at the stars in ye night sky, and I say, how lucky am I.
Though war plain and treachery we may find as we go
it will pass by us without harm we know.
O, let down your lance, young warriors of the west
for the skies have turned grey and it is time to return home.
Through every place I’ve seen and been
Let me stay with those I trust
I leave my iron crown, covered in rust.
O, hollow be the day our paths break away
for lonely am I
in my deepest heart
For lonely am I.
Where I seek to go is where my people be
where I roam I see what the world would have hidden from me
Green the trees and light the sky, they share the laughter of you and I,
Let us ride until the sun goes down, and find comfort in our coming around.
Fray Alleal şi Orio, esay enfre enda dio
Come around, come around, O, and see us by
Green the trees and light the sky
We share in laughter, you and I.
Burial:
The path I walk is paved in blood
I drag myself through valleys of mud
I’m forever seeking my end
Behold! Behold! The king is dead
I raise my head, the sun has shone
The flesh that’s clinging to my bones
I cannot speak, I’m filled with dread
Behold! Behold! My queen is dead
I travel alone, my horse by my side
One goal in mind, for miles I ride
In darkest night, the throes of death are found
Of glittering teeth, stalks a terrible hound
Doomed am I to wander far?
Will never I again look in comfort at the stars?
Mother! Father! Call to me
Tell me where I am supposed to be
Can not this death be quieted?
The darkness in my heart has rioted
Call me please, back to my home
I’m tired, I’m lost, too far I have roamed
(Following because I like these so far.)
(aahh tysm! ^^)
(These are good)
(Thank-you!!! <3)
:-(
A Sad Day:
First I could not find my nuts
My almond nuts, not other nuts
Searched me high, searched me low
Almond slices in the freezer?
Oh.
Pour them upon a plate, lord
Place them on my keyboard
Sit upon my knees
Almonds upon a plate upon the keys upon my knees
I began to eat my snack
Upon that perilous stack
Tip just a bit to the side
my almonds began to slide
My heart began to jog
They fell upon my dog!
My dog, my dog, upon my dog
Almond slices upon my dog
Sad day, sad day
Pick them up right away
Sad day, sad day
I ate them anyway