forum Short stories of death
Started by @Knight-Shives group
tune

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@Knight-Shives group

Originally I had four of these stories. Though I have to rewrite due to deletion or just plain loosing them. Though they are super short stories. I actually had them revolve around some elements(Water, wind, fire, nature). the only one I have is water, can I have an opinion
Also I was going to extend them to have them connect. So just because it says that they died, doesn't mean they died. They all just think they died.

@Knight-Shives group

Here is the story

The water rushed in to my lungs, cold and fierce. the darkness spread through my vision. I was losing my consciousness, I knew I was. No fear. No  regrets. No thoughts of hope or success. I was going to die. I felt the water invading my mouth, my nose, my ears, I could not get away from it. This is my grave, my watery grave that i was cursed to never leave. I managed to stay up a little but the waves pulled me down not wanting me to go. Sirens. In the distance, but too far. Not close enough to help me I was going to die here, There was no hope left. The darkness engulfed my vision and everything was black. This was the end.
Light Flooded my vision, too quickly. I was in a bed but I still felt as though I was in the water still. My body felt like jelly. The room was sterile white and plain. there were voices nearby in a hall maybe, but I could not make out the words. Two people were sitting across the room one on a couch the other on a chair, but both asleep. I had a migraine and my lungs hurt, when i breathed deep they burned. But I still had doubt that this was real. I was probably still in the water, in my watery grave. Dead.