Hi everyone! Just wanted to share the link to the Zodiac Sign story that I've been writing and am using this website to help organize and develop: https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3311511/1/The-History-of-the-Zodiac. If you're interested at all in astrology or fantasy, please check it out and give me feedback on what I've written so far! I would really appreciate it! Thanks!
It's pretty interesting so far! One tip, I learned in my writing class, every time a different person in speaking, you start a new paragraph with their dialogue. So if father and son are speaking back and forth to each other, then you will have multiple paragraphs (even if they are only one line long) instead of one big paragraph. Hope this helps :)
Very interesting concept! I would suggest less use of adverbs, especially in dialogue scenes, but otherwise, a solid start to a story. Keep it up!
Thanks for the feedback so far, it's been really helpful! I'm glad you guys find it interesting! I'll be finishing the Aries Arc soon and moving on to Taurus' (since I'm going in order based on birth date range). The updates might be slow since I started college classes again a week ago, but I'm going to try to continue the story as effectively as possible! Thanks again for the feedback!
This thread is old but I also have a Zodiac story if you guys are interested. https://www.wattpad.com/story/133625637-zodiac