forum Rate My World?

Started March 12, 2018 by @Vhips

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Hey, I just made this new universe and I'd love it if someone gave me some feedback.

It's very interesting. I would like to see how this gets written out. I hope to see more that comes up.
I do suggest flushing things out and making things a tad bit clearer if others suggest. I'm a speed reader so I might just not be used to having to read slowly.