forum Please Critique My Non-Binary Bab
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tune

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Hello! First off, I'd like to say that Dakota is lovely.

  1. Their overview looks great!

  2. For a 5'0" 16-year-old (biological) female, the healthy weight range is between 86 pounds and 126.5 pounds. I don't know if they were purposely overweight or not but I just thought this might be handy to know! (edit: I see that their body type is chubby. I'm just going to keep this here for reference though. I'm almost two inches taller than them but I'm a good 30 pounds lighter. If you want Dakota to be chubby but not overweight I might adjust their weight a little bit).

  3. Can I ask why their politics, occupation, and favourite possession slots are N/A?

  4. Pet peeve of mine: BLACK IS NOT A COLOUR IT'S A SHADE! (Sorry).

  5. Their background is very detailed! I like it!

Overall Dakota is a very well thought out and detailed character! I like them! (Kudos to you for including LGBTQ+). I hope this was helpful. Good luck with your story! :)