I would love some critiques on my guys and hopefully, they're not too bad. You also don't have to critique all of them, just do as many as you'd like! Thank you in advance!
Cole: Cole Granger
Hunter: Hunter Granger
Seth: Seth Reed
Tristan: Tristan Bowyer
Cole: He is really skinny. That's the first thing I'm gonna say. If he's supposed to have some meat on him, the weight you gave gives him nothing. For the hair style, are we looking at him and it's our left/right or is it his left/right? For eye color it's usually good to get really descriptive with color (like you did with his hair) and so - for example - is it like beige? amber? or chestnut? Also maybe do that with his skin tone. I would say something in the religion catagory but maybe that's just cause I don't know your story. That's an amazing job on your background. (Maybe some of it might be able to go in other catagories?) Over all, I would say he's an amazing character and that the website is pretty much for you so you can put whatever you want on it.
@Evelena
With every website I've checked, he's almost "overweight." It's our left/right. I put his eye color as russet brown and his skin color as dark beige. Yeah, I also still need to flesh it out better. Thank you, I appreciate the critique!
Okay, I must've been having a little outdated information for the weight part. I just looked it up too cause I could've sworn… Well, I can't be right all the time XD
@Evelena
Maybe lol
It's fine though, not fun to be right all the time?
I suppose not. I am usually right about things though so being wrong is something I have very little experience with. I don't usually say something unless I have prior knowledge about it.
@Evelena
Yeah, I'm not right often. I understand that, like with the weights, I always check them but sometimes they're wrong so I just find the correct one and move on.
I guess I'm just pretty chill about most things?
Yeah
Cole:Birthday: September 30,1023.
He's not 17,he's like,1000. And if this is anchient times,he wouldn't be wearing a t-shirt and pants. Overall,interesthing.
Hunter: What shape is his birthmark? Yet again,if he truly was born in 1001,he would be older,and if this takeas place in the 1000s,he wouldn't be wearing a t-shirt.
Seth: How did he get his scars? Visiting Val's grave shouldn't really be a hobby,maybe put that under notes? And also,he has the same year and clothing problem as all the others.
Tristan: The age and clothes. He's overall acceptable. I don't really have much else to say,except that Tristan reminds me of Chara from Undertale. Have a nice day!
@Annika
Thank you! For all of them, in this universe, it takes place during a medieval era but with more modern clothes. And the time period for the story they're in starts in 1040.
Hunter: Still trying to figure that out myself, but it's very large.
Seth: It'll be explained in my story, just wanted to make sure I have all of my characters to be at least decent before I start writing more of it. I changed it to "Visiting different graveyards, but mostly Val's grave (He's a Taphophile)." The more I think about it, he seems like someone who would be into taphophilia.
Tristan: Now that you mention it, he reminds me of Chara too lol
Again, thank you! You have a nice day too!