forum Original vs. Rewrite!

Started January 13, 2019 by @SupernaturalSyGuyIsTIred group

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Hello fellow notebookers! I'm looking for someone to critique both the original and the rewritten versions for one of my stories. It'll mainly be the original that you'll be looking at though, for I'm not that far on the rewritten version; still working on chapter 1 actually. The original only consists of 5 chapters. Anyone interested?

I will if you still need someone

:-D We'll start with the original version, if that's alright!

Sure

I inboxed you.

Oh yeah sorry everything slips my mind
I'll do it now

Do you mind if I used google docs to suggest things?

That's fine, though I do use Google Docs for my writing, research, etc.