@SupernaturalSyGuyIsTIred group
Looking for more than one opinion on a long co-written story that has more than 40 chapters plus bonus material. I'll let you decide on which y'all wanna critique first; the story or the bonus material. Please feel free to ask me questions, give advice/suggestions, etc.
Note: The story is the very 1st rough draft, so it is riddled with inconsistencies that I am aware of.