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I need critiques for my story because I'm not at all confident in my work and all of my friends are busy but everything I post gets ignored please critique something of mine
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Literally nobody is giving me critiques please help
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@HumCat
Sure i'll critique something
(I know that feeling all to well…)
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Daniel Conway @HumCat can you please critique this character?
@HumCat
From what I can see, this is a very good character. Although I don't think being loving/caring (even to that degree) is a flaw. And guys can grow beards at fourteen so he's not too young to have one (although if you make Daniel think he is too young to have one that would give us a little more understanding of how he thinks).
Other than that, you did great and I don't have any other criticism.