forum just please Critique

Started May 23, 2018 by @poshtopus

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I'm unsure about ability to make good characters so please just help me build on my stuff

Sure! What can I help you with?

I just generally unsure about the quality of things I've made so, like, review or something.

Hey @poshtopus I just checked out your character Shen on you public page. Overall I think they are a very well put together character, with good flaws, and a solid foundation for a character arc. Do you have a plot figured out that this character fits in to? I think the world around them (or what little of it I have gathered from their bio) is very intriguing. I like the ability to bring wooden carvings to life, like as an extension of the godly powers. I like this character and the world around them. I don't think you should be insecure about you abilities. You have a really good start here that you can build on!

Also, do you have anything else about this world written down? I'm very curious about it.