forum I´m writting a story

Started March 03, 2019 by @Star_Girls_puppers_was_attacked

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So I´m writting a story here it is
ten collage students go to Oakwood academy and my main character beth keeps seeing this man so she and her three friends go to the library to meet peter and he is completley insane they slowly leave the libaray just to see a man on the other side of the street they don´t think anything of it untill he smashes two cars they all run to a gas station where the other charavters are and they think they are safe but an over-sized wolf falls through the celing which is the killer you see he kills animals and takes thier hearts and stores the hearts in jars in his lab and he saves them for when he needs them and when that time comes he eats the heart and turns into that animal but only for an hour so at the end only two people live.

The thing about how how he turns into the animal if he eats its heart is fantastic! I love it! Just a few questions:

1. Are the man, Peter, and the killer all the same person, or different people?
2. Why did Beth and her friends decide to go see Peter?
3. After seeing the man smash the cars, why did Beth and her friends decide to go to a gas station?
4. Is the fact that it's a gas station important?
5. Why were the other characters in the gas station?
6. Do the other characters know each other, or are they strangers?
7. Do Beth and her friends know the other characters?
8. What is the killer's reason/motivation for pursuing Beth?
9. What do you mean by "so at the end only two people live"? I'm a bit confused about who you're referring to, and how it connects to the killer's ability to transform into animals.

Your story sounds amazing! I'd love to read it :)

(I love your username, by the way)

1. Different
2. They were supposed to have a Study Session
   3.They were running for thier lifes
3. No
4. They were hiding
   6.They know each other
   7.Yes
   8.she knows things
   9.I´m just saying that there are two survivors

Huh. So was the killer chasing the other characters too, not just Beth and her friends?

yes

Do they know things, too?

(I kind of feel like I'm interrogating you, sorry XD I'm just curious)

no it´s okay)
No the main people who know things are peter and beth

Okay, so then why was the killer chasing the other characters? To get to Peter and Beth? (Also, is Peter with them in the gas station or is he still in the library?)

He is chasing them for two reasons to get to beth and peter and he hasn´t had dinner

he is in the library

"and he hasn't had dinner" XD I love that. Dude, your story sounds awesome.

thanks

here are my characters if you want to ask questionabout them

Beth
Rebecca
Jaxson
Jace
Jesse
Ruby
Pheobe
Peter
Ross
Katy

Okay. You said they're all in college, right? Are they all in the same year? What are their relationships with each other? How long have they known each other? What is each character's importance to the story? Who is your favourite character and why?

WOAH OK
My favorite character would be Beth or Rebecca since Beth is based off me and rebecca is based off my bestfriend

whoops. sorry for spamming you with questions. sheepish face
cool :) I'm always afraid to write about a real person, or base character off of them because I'm worried I'll get it wrong XD

Well I love doing it it inspires me to do better.

I think that's cool, and very brave of you.

Thanks oh i finished chapter one if you want to read it.

ooh yes please!

https://www.storystreetlabs.com/story/my-nightmares-chapter-1

ooh I love the cliffhanger! And opening with an action scene is a great hook, good job!

Thanks so did you like it.

I did :) there were a few typos—would you like me to point them out, or no? I don't know if you're looking for edits/critiques or just general feedback.