forum I'll Edit Your Works and Give Feedback!

Started March 04, 2019 by @Alexx04

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Just send me your work and I can read it over and give feedback and edit it through. I do it for all of my friend's works, so I think I've got a good handle on it!

Hi! Do you think you could read my story over? I have some comments already on there, so it isn't "fresh out of the oven" as some may say. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_W_kipaIKQzj5fm29cC89DR7HkrfOb0s_pu3pM0pxfc/edit?usp=sharing

I like the whole vibe, but why would Archer want to kill her just because he wasn't in love anymore? And I'm sorry, I kinda wish I could, but I don't have time to read through the entire thing. I'm a SUPER slow reader, and that's heckin' long! I do enjoy what you've got going on, but I did find a few grammar and punctuation mistakes that could have totally just been typos.
Good job!