forum How can I make this better?

Started March 26, 2019 by @Zandra2119

tune

It's short, there isn't much detail. The characters (The Raven and The Fox) symbolize me and my friend. *they are people, not animals just fyi
It's going in the direction I want it to, but I know it can be better. Any thoughts? ples

Ples

I don't know about everyone else but I'm not allowed access so that may be why you haven't gotten help yet

Oh, ok thanks

Should work now =)