Hey! I just started worldbuilding and creating characters to my story, so the plot and stuff isn't wonderfully developed, which explains some of the gaps on these pages. Can someone critique my universe? I'm mostly looking for critique on the universe itself but feel free to critique the other stuff as well.
I'll have a go!
Ok first, I like the name, its easy to pronounce and sounds like a good name!
Next, I love how you said that two modern kids literally end up in the middle of a fight on a small rowboat. I find that really funny trying to imagine that for some reason xD
Alright, huge no no. If it is just like earth but has magic, it is not like earth at all! Think about it, if people were suddenly able to turn invisible on earth, it might be 'normal Earth' for a few months tops, but eventually, people would have to start adjusting to others being able to turn invisible. Stores would have to have more serious security. People would have to put rules in schools about turning invisible so the students wouldn't just walk out during the day. Would there be laws about shooting an invisible person? Story development goes wayyyyy farther than just 'earth but with magic'
If you mean that it has geography and the literal planet is like earth, then say that!
Thats all I got lol, hope I helped!