forum Hey, I brainstormed a bit for a scene *way* later on in my fanfic, can you tell me what you think of the dialogue? **VERY INCOMPLETE**
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  • "You!" Shuri glared at me as she shoved me away. "You oblivious idiot!"
  • Her voice broke as she curled her fists. "You don't think I care? About your health? You could have died tonight, Yoona!"
    I stepped toward her. "Shuri-"
    "No. Don't 'Shuri' me."
    "I'm fine. Yeah, it was a dangerous situation, but that just means we're one step closer to defeating Thanos, right? Why do you care so much if I live or die? The results are more important than my life, anyway."
    "Don't think so little of yourself!" she cried out, throwing up her hands in exasperation. She paused. "You really don't see it, don't you?"
    "See what? Shuri, I'm fine!"
  • "You're a hurricane, Yoona Kim. You pull people in, make them care, then nearly throw away your life like it was nothing. Mr. Stark cares. Thor cares. I care! And yet, you're the only person who doesn't see that you have to love yourself! That I love you!" She froze, shoulders tensing.
    My eyes widened. "What?"
    She looked away. "I love you, Yoona Kim. I love you so much it hurts."

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Well
Im working on it
I haven't published it yet
But I think that scene is really good!
Wait is this like infinity war fan fic?