@Laurenisnotmyrealname
Never used Notebook.ai for critiques, but im here to give it a try. I wrote a short story, that's in need of critques (as it's going up with my website soon). Any feedback would be appreciated!
(also try and be CONSTRUCTIVE. As fun as it is to try and look for all the things wrong with people's work, try and at least be helpful ; ) )
Thanks y'all!
Here's the link : https://docs.google.com/document/d/10hBbwwbRwIHh3pqdJGbQUuHYF8mZlvxR2B_emTk3Ngk/edit?usp=sharing
(let me know if it doesn't work :D )