forum Guys pls critique my character shes really gooood :((((

Started December 22, 2020 by Winterperson

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Pls

Here is the liiiink ok someone pls respond or ill cry myself to fuckig slep

Okay I'd like to get some more details, character goals, and describe her a bit more. what has she done over her long life. And how will she be used in the story?

What a beautiful female woman. I absolutely adore her

A strong, independent lesbian. Inspiring.