forum Give me feedback, please.

Started February 28, 2021 by @SupernaturalSyGuyIsTIred group

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Could someone give me feedback on this version of Demon's Hunt? I'm looking for your thoughts on the plot, scenes and events, first impressions of characters and other thoughts related to them.

wow your very good at planning your stories. I usually just wing it lol. I love it so far, but I would give readers information in a more subtle way, discreetly slipping it in to the story.