forum Feedback on Magic/Story Base Idea
Started by @Katastrophic group
tune

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@Katastrophic group

Hello! I just finished up the base framework for my story and would love some thoughts on it!

Please ask every question and feel free to be critical of anything and everything, any question you guys have would be a potential thing I need to explain better to possible future readers or adjust. As this is the base of my whole story idea, it's important for this system to be stable and understandable (or mostly understandable at least, it is fantasy and magic after all…) I just need to make sure I can explain it well enough for other people to get it without all the context I have in my head =)