forum Fanfiction critique (specifically characterization)

Started February 23, 2019 by @amber_is_in_a_loop

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Ideally I need a bare fan for this. Otherwise I can explain the characters a little and you can judge from that or just tell me your impressions of how I wrote the characters

Also there is zero smut or sexiness if that's putting you off. It's simply a story about how Jason and Peter started their relationship and I'm not even far in yet