forum Critique some (fantasy) world history?
Started by @FantaPop
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@FantaPop

I'm building a homebrew world for D&D and just need someone to look over the history section of this 'verse and ask a couple questions about anything confusing or not explained enough, 'cause my brain is fried at the moment and i've been staring at the page for a good while. ^^;

@TryToDoItWrite

Looks pretty good to me! Nothing too confusing going on. You could hash out the details about the halflings in the faywilds more! that looked interesting to me and there wasn't a bunch about it