forum Critique please?

Started April 05, 2018 by @[email protected]

tune

Im writing a collection named: Confessions, this would be the first chapter (sort of) Please help since i don't speak English as my first language, Thank you :)

Hey, @"[email protected]" ! I'll critique it for you! Do you wanna come talk in my chat? It'll be easier for me to keep up with you that way because I check that one as often as I can.