forum Critique my Wattpad story, please
Started by @lenaveritas
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@lenaveritas

Below is the link to a story I started on Storybird and moved to Wattpad. I havent completed it, though it is laid out in my head. Just keep in mind I began it several years back and recenty picked it back up, so it might sound childish to start. Though, being honest, I probably havent changed that much. Only 7 chapters are published so far, but I have more waiting to be uploaded. THANKS!!!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/180745277-two-lost-souls

@saor_illust school

haha no problem! i really like it, to be honest. keep up the work! it's really intriguing, and if i forgot to comment on a chapter it's cause i was focused more on the story haha