forum Critique My Opening/Prologue (Must be a fan of Supernatural)
Started by @SupernaturalSyGuyIsTIred group
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@SupernaturalSyGuyIsTIred group

So, I'm writing a Spn fanfic with one of my friends. Despite not actually having the Winchesters in it, we do reference events, creatures, characters, objects, locations, and even use some songs from the show. I took creative liberty with certain things though.

I'm looking for someone who can politely suggest changes, and tell me how they feel towards the characters. I also ask that you don't point out grammar errors, for if I am to grow as a writer, it'd be bettter for me to search for them on my own.
Would anyone like to beta-read and critique it for me?