forum Critique my extremely outspoken MC

Started August 09, 2018 by @n o s t r a d a m u s location_city

tune

Just be wary there is a lot of info, and contextual stuff. She's and absolute ray of sunshine (jk is actually an anti-authoritarian salt machine). Destroy away.

Honestly it seems like you've thought her through extremely well and I'm not sure what else to say. Are there specific parts of her you'd like critiqued? If so I'd probably be able to give you a deeper response.