forum Critique My Character-

Started February 05, 2018 by @HeliumBlaze

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Could ya'll critique Gerard? I find it hard to belive he's perfect, any ideas on how to make him a little deeper?

Honestly? He's awesome. Very realistic. Every detail is well-thought out and interesting. My only complaint is the brevity and vagueness of his backstory. It has the least detail of everything. flesh it out some more, and I think you're all set.

good job :)