forum Critique my blurb please.

Started August 29, 2018 by @mckapo

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Banished to Neverland, Pan spends years ferrying souls to the afterlife, and taking those that have not received their Judgments with him to the realm of Lost Souls. Accompanied by his Lost Boys on a routine mission to collect the souls from Earth, Pan comes across a deadly and intelligent fey queen, who is dead set on killing Pan and destroying Neverland, hoping to disrupt the magical barrier Pan himself has erected over Earth from Neverland's magic that protects it from the realm-and the creatures who live there- known as Limbo.

Interesting concept, the "blurb" as you call it, is a bit confusing, but again the idea is really interesting.

It sounds cool. This is kinda more of a summary, but, yeah, it is kinda confusing but once I read it again it was okay. I do think it could be really cool if you explain well and have developed enough characters for it to not become too confusing.