forum Character Critique/review
Started by Camilo
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Camilo

I've been working on some characters for a story idea and have a few drawings of them, and some ideas of their character types but could use some feedback. This is the first character named Nadia: her home was destroyed in a previous war along with family except for her older sister Naya, now they travel together hoping to find a new home.
She is very much a kind sweet character and through her optimism looks for the best in any situation and in people.

The next one is Character named Rokonto: A farm boy of the Jungle nation, he lived a peaceful life with his parents but when war came to their country they were taken captive and separated through slavery, where he was sold to be a worker and used for his strength, and a gladiator to fight for a living, he later escaped with the help of two other captives the twin spider sisters, and now all 3 are sticking together and helping any one who needs help along the way back to their nation.
Is incredibly strong and powerful but is a gentle giant, does not like to fight unless he has to to defend his friends, is a bit shy but kind and helpfull to anyone.

@JamHudson

First: HOLY FLUFF THESE ARE BOMB DRAWINGS!!!!!
I really like the artwork. Sorry. About that. You are a good artist.
Second… I will need to think for critique. But your general ideas so far for each character is great. I'm honestly not the bestest with critique, but I want to try.