forum Can someone please critique my story?

Started February 14, 2018 by @AJ

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Working Title: Cyber

Short Summary:
In the far future, several devastating wars have forced humanity to barricade themselves in high-tech dome cities. Injured veterans have come home with cybernetic limbs, but the only battery strong enough to power them is dangerously explosive, forcing the Borgs to the lowest rung of society.

Marnie Van Dax, a quirky inventor from the wealthiest class of the city, stumbles into a loop of rebellion and conspiracy with no way out. Everything she's ever been taught about the world is falling apart; good is bad and black and white have all but faded to gray.

As her confusion grows, the looming decision creeps closer: Who and what is she fighting for?

Genre(s): Sci-Fi, Utopia/ Dystopia, Action, Adventure
Media Type: Animated TV series

Link to Marnie's profile: Marnie Van Dax

I think this could be interesting, but as it stands, there isn't much to critique. It's an idea as far as I know at the moment, but if you feel like it, I'd happily hear you out on any other details. Don't worry about it being polished or anything, just to type out your ideas and maybe find new ones in the process whilst getting feedback at the same time. Just to vent out what you want the story to be. I do that all the time and end up fixing a bunch of plot holes I didn't even realize I had.