forum Can someone critique this character?
Started by @Lynnnnn
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Krynn

Overall I really like it. There are a few things here and there, such as her flaws.

Such as not very good at math, pessimistic at times, and lazy. I can buy these but my question is how does this play into the story?

Also, one of her motivations, (Wanting to be a hero because it's fun) How does that affect her education since she was hired to kill and all?

I'm not that good at critiquing characters…but I hope that helped!