@The Seliph-loving Gryffindor who also loves dragons and cats
So, one of my characters leaves a suicide note (more of a death note, they didn't commit suicide) and this is what they write.
"I have been having this vision of death for all my life. I was lying in a pool of blood. I found the place where I died in my vision. I'm going to die soon. I'm sorry. I think I'll die of childbirth, considering that I'm close to childbirth and that my mother… I'm sorry, everyone. Please, stay strong."
Do you think this is a good death note? I'll listen to any criticisms you have, just as long as they are said calmly.
