forum Can someone critique my characters?
Started by @CW-BornConfuzzledLeftILoveYa
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*Abram
-Nature
Could you tell me what he does when he’s angry or sad? What does he do with different emotions. You said he leads with his emotions s there must be something there.
-Social
What do you mean he doesn’t have any politics? He must have an opinion on everything. Something he just picked up from the people around him or something he just thinks himself that are right.
-Notes
Ok so I’ve always liked the name Theodore. But when I say it with the rest of the name it sounds kinda stupid but David kinda works.

*Otis
-Overview
Where did he get the nickname Cheeri-o and who calls him that?
-Looks
Could you describe his body type better to me? I don’t really get it.
-Nature
Could you tell me more of his mannerisms? Ya know stuff he does just without thinking.
-Social
Again with the politics. Really it doesn’t mean too much like voting and government politics but more like “How do they view the world? What’s right and wrong to them?”

*Annika
-Overview
Who calls her Butt-Butt and what for?
-Nature
Could you tell me more of her mannerisms? What does she do when she’s excited or bored?
-Social
You know what I’m gonna say. Politics. You said she doesn’t prefer LGBT+ people so maybe she’s conservative?
-History
Her history doesn’t tell us much. Just tell me simple things, like what’s she doing now, how is her relationship with her parents? Things like that.