I've been working on my boy Jesse for a while now and I'd really love to hear some feedback from the community. Be as harsh as you'd like, it's all appreciated! If any of you guys have a way to perhaps make him feel more realistic in such an exuberantly different world, I'd love to hear it.
I love this character, he kind of reminds me of James Adams from Cherub. It's a realistic character and there are enough tidbits of information there that could really make the story interesting (e.g easy to anger, fuelled by fear, eager to help and undiagnosed PTSD). Over all it's really great and I think the story will be a good read if you keep it consistent. :)
@Tiani Thank you so much! I've worked hard to strike a balance between character and person, so this is a really great comment to receive.
Glad to be of service!