forum Yellow Plague - Worldwide Zombie Apocalypse (Open; 8/12)
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Petronella saw a cafe she might be able to find supplies in. V saw her, and realized, I'm fully mutated….. she may kill me….

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-.-. .- .- -. ..–.–…-. … .- -.. – .? Zoe tapped back to him. He replied " Yes, my mother and cousin Cordelia taught it to me." It was about time. Zoe could finally understand him. Zoe relaxed back in the chair. " Well, you better sleep, it's gonna be a long day tomorrow." A restless sleep had succumb her as her world went black.

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( Wait, does that other character know V?)

(They're about to meet so…?)

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( So how do they know each, other, you problaby shouldn't use V's name until she gives it.)

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( So how do they know each, other, you problaby shouldn't use V's name until she gives it.)

(Petronella doesn't use V's name just yet, and you can call people by their names if first person or they are introduced.)

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( No I wouldn't because then it would be weird, here I can give you an example: Petronella was walking along the silent streets on the city, when something caught her eye. Down the street was a shattered cafe. She didn't know why, but she had the urge to go in and search th place. Then out of her vision she saw a zombie heading towards her.
This makes it more interesting and clear while,
"Petronella saw a cafe she might be able to find supplies in. V saw her, and realized, I'm fully mutated….. she may kill me…."
I think that sounds weird and I wouldn't get what was going on. Well that was my opinion, but you don't have to use it.)

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She walked in, it was open. Huh, weird… V hid behind a table, hoping she wouldn't be noticed.

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( Nice to see that you openly ignored that but, ok…)

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( Nice to see that you openly ignored that but, ok…)

(Shut up)

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( What I was just trying to give you advice because some people might not have the same opinions as yours.)

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( Its also a great thing to get feedback on your writing so you can improve it, good or bad.)

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(It was a playful banter type of "Shut up" not a mean kind)