forum Vacation Romance One-On-One (Closed)

Started July 26, 2018 by @Rvan group

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Idk what it’s going to be about… any prompts?

Hi friend! Maybe like a vacation romance romance thing. I’ve got an idea for a story that I’ve been wanting to work on but haven’t gotten the chance. Voice be a one on one or a small group thing.

Yeah, we can do a one-on-one :) What’s the idea?

Hold on a minute let me find it. I just want to flesh it out more. I have another rep with it also but I want to see what directions it would go.

So basically this boy and girl are on vacation and their total strangers. The guy is hanging out with his buddies and stares at the girl a lot. There’s major awkward eye contact for a couple days. The girl is on vacay with her best friend and her eye is always drawn to the boy. For whatever reason they get paired up to do some event thing at the hotel a few days in and have to talk. They hit it off and exchange numbers. Whenever they aren’t at the pool together theyre texting each other. Eventually they had to go home (the vacation lasts like 3 weeks for both of them). The girl has 2 gay dads and one is in the military. Her dad gets stationed in the same state as where the boy lives in and they end up at the same school and in a lot of classes.
That’s about as far as I’ve gotten but I’ve put a lot of thought into it and some of it is from my irl experiences. I thought it sounded cool and wanted to flesh it out a little bit.

Also words are hard. Excuse my crappy spelling

Don’t worry about the spelling, lol
I like it! Do you want to be the boy or girl?

Girl

Cool! Do u want to make a template cause it’s your idea?

If it’s okay I’m just gonna fill in both of the characters and you can add your own little twists here and there of you what

I’m cool with that too :)

Okie dokie. I’ll work on that in a few. Have to do something real quick first

Girl
Name: Paris Anderson
Age: 17
Sexuality: straight
Personality: smart, nice, is shy at first but then let’s loose once she gets to know you, very bouncy and draws attention to herself.
Looks: long brown hair that hangs curly down to her mid back, ocean blue eyes, 5’3”, sun kissed skin, brightens a room when she smiles and makes everyone melt with her laugh.
Outfit: usually jean shorts and a plain shirt, typically pink, coral, or maroon.
Swimsuit: hot pink halter bikini top and plain black bikini bottoms
Hobbies: staring and Brennan before they meet, and texting him after they meet. Reading, writing, hanging out with her best friend.
Usual day to day stuff: same as hobbies. Swimming, going to the beach, dinner with her best friends family.

Boy
Name: Brennan McCarthy
Age: 18
Sexuality: straight
Personality: draws attention to himself with out meaning too, confident, caring
Looks: 5’10”, hair; https://goo.gl/images/eNgfGH but sandy blonde and light brown, muscular, has a heart stopping smile.
Outfit: a blue top of some sort and khaki shorts, and flip flops
Swimsuit: blue stripped trunks that start with dark stripes and ombré down to light blue and eventually to a solid white.
Hobbies: dodging the “vacation whore” named Vanessa, swimming, going to the beach.
Usual day to day stuff: same as hobbies, hanging with his buddies, taking care of his 5 year old brother.

Coolness. I ready to start whenever u are?

I’m ready. Do you want to start or do you want me to?

Can you? I’m not great at starting

(Sure)
Paris walked out to the pool as she had done the past two days and he was there. He always seemed to be there before her and stayed there almost all day. Of course he wasn’t with the ‘Vacation Whore’, as Paris, her best friend Madylin and Madylins dad nicknamed her, today. That only seemed to happen at night during the movies the hotel projects by the pool so you can swim and watch at the same time.
“Ooo ‘surfer dude’ is out here again today” Madylin whispered nudging Paris in the side.
“Shhh Maddy don’t draw attention to us he might here” she said in a hushed whisper, matching Madylin.

Brennan relaxed in the warm pool, his eyes grazing the surrounding in case he had to make a mad dash to avoid Vanessa. Gosh… sometimes she just wouldn’t stop talking. He let his shoulders relax as his eyes didn’t find her, but they found someone else. It was that cute girl with sun-kissed skin and ocean blue eyes.

Paris slid into the pool and felt eyes on her. She knew it had to be him. Nobody else stared like he does, not that she was complaining, he was hot and she liked the attention.

Brennan realized he had been staring and gave a light laugh at himself, shaking his head. He looked up again at the cute girl, wondering if he should introduce himself.

Madylin walked down the steps and Paris jumped at her doing a back flip, trying to splash her. When she broke through the water once again she saw she had succeeded and Madylin was covered in water.
“Paris!” Madylin squealed wiping water from her face.
“My bad” Paris shrugged lightly splashed her again. This started a small water fight between the two.

Brennan couldn’t help but laugh (not laughing at them but laughing because they look like they’re enjoying themselves) at the two girls having a water fight. He subtly floated towards they’re end of the pool.

“We look like children!” Madylin squealed as she was hit by another splash.
“Who cares!” Paris said, slowing down her splashing as her arms became tired.
“True story” The minor water fight resolved itself and Madylin did a back flip, careful not to start another water war.

Brennan felt a few water droplets hit his face as one of the girls jumped into the pool. He smiled and then he caught the eye of the cute girl in the hot pink halter bikini top.

Paris stood eyes locked with ‘sufer dude’. She wasn’t sure what to do. Madylin could sense something was about to happen and stood back. Letting the two do there thing and not interfering.