forum Red Queen, Blue Kingdom (closed)
Started by @blue_topaz
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@Natasha

"I'm just looking for someplace to eat. But the queen destroyed all of the places that I usually go to."

(See?)

@Natasha

(@Topaz you have only just solidified Kimberly's torture with this paragraph.)

Dammit I write another

(And @Topaz, Cough cough Swear jar.)

@Desvelarse pets

“Yeah, I guess you’ve got a point,” Santiago joked. He held out her hand for her to shake. “I’m Santiago Navarro. You?”

@ScarletAndHerSides

"I'm just looking for someplace to eat. But the queen destroyed all of the places that I usually go to."

“Food? Go straight and where there’s rhis giant three? Turn left three times over there, then go straight and on your left you’ll see some place where there’s good food. Better savor that too. The queen is coming for that place next.” Chelsea instructed.

@blue_topaz

(And now what do I do? Just have her go to eat, then what?)

Scarlet’s about to run, maybe they can bump into each other?

@blue_topaz

(@Topaz you have only just solidified Kimberly's torture with this paragraph.)

Dammit I write another

(And @Topaz, Cough cough Swear jar.)

Drops in. a dollar

@blue_topaz

Queen Alice smiled, exposing the blood and flesh dripping from her teeth. “Oh hello, Scarlet. I was just cleansing the palace of a few idiots, I haven’t done that in What now, ten years?” Scarlet’s hands trembled. “Three years. And you haven’t eaten in one.” Her stomach churned as the Queen cackled. “Oh yes, that. I’ve got to wipe my mouth, Cook’s son’s heart was delicious, but it made a terrible mess.” She tugged sharply on a chain, and a little girl, no more than nine years old, tumbled to the ground, her left arm just a torn, bleeding stump. Scarlet gasped, recognizing her instantly as Cook’s daughter, Mae. Mae had tears on her eyes, but still she held her head high. Scarlet rushed forward, but her mother drew a knife, holding it in front of her. “Kill her.”, Alice said cheerily. Scarlet blanched. “What?!” In the same cheerful tone of voice, the Queen said: “Kill her, or I kill you.” Scarlet stood, frozen to the spot as her mother pressed the knife into her hand.

@Natasha

(@Topaz every time you write a paragraph like this, you are adding a little bit of pain to one of my characters. Dani seems to have some room for another flash-back. *grins evily)

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« Thank you, Santiago. «  Quinn nodded towards him, turning away to go outside.

@PuffPoff

Cade pretended he was looking for something on the shelves as he listened into the conversation. He did this often, hoping to hear something insder information about the Queen.

@blue_topaz

Scarlet shook her head desperately, taking a step backwards, but the Queen whipped out a long, wickedly sharp knife, pressing it to the back of her daughter’s neck. “Kill her now. Remember what happened last time you disobeyed me?” Scarlet’s eyes widened in terror. She raised the knife with trembling hands, looking poor Mae in the eye with beads of sweat forming in her forehead. “I’m sorry.”, she whispered.