(K guys they're good I have some critique for both or you
Shade:
- Her Outfit is impractical for being on the run
- You forgot to fill in a few spaces
Noodle:
- you forgot her name
- No runes sorry mate
- No wands
pls change these things)
//ahh I feel you bro
Should I add in my character?
Name: Irafaris
Age: 19
Gender: male
Looks: 5'11", green eyes, black hair, (not really sure what to add here)
Attire: white cloak, grey jerkin,
Personality: he's fascinated by any kind of magic, calm any other time
Flaws: he's a bit too protective of… everyone
Talents: ilusionary magic,
Hobbies: entertaining people with illusions
Favorite Weapon: http://www.buyingasword.com/images/Product/large/MC-FM-421B.png (<–he already has this, and it's a focus for his illusion magic)
Worst Fear: injuring someone
One Random Fact: he once accidentally made someone's drink freeze so fast that the glass exploded
Other: bi, has a smoking pipe
Sorry I'm taking so long to post my character, I just went swimming in the lake by my house with my mum and sister so I've been busy, but I'm working on it!
(I fixed her. I forgot to fill things in because I had a sheet. Then I hit refresh and I lost the sheet.)
Name: Zoe Melana
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Looks: She has long, wavy black hair, blue eyes, pale skin with sprinkles of freckles.
Attire: A green hooded cloak, white tunic, brown trousers, and brown boots that go up to her knee. She has a belt bag that goes around her waist that contains important potions and potion grenades.
Personality: She is a really outgoing person who is willing to take risks and loves pulling pranks. She is also inventive and a fast thinker who is apparently really stubborn and can be too critical.
Flaws: Stubborn, too critical, very loyal, annoying.
Talents: She makes potion, also knows herbalism, dancing, archery.
Hobbies: Making potions, searching for ingredients, archery, pulling pranks.
Favorite Weapon: Bow an Arrow.
Worst Fear: Rejection
One Random Fact: Is obsessed with bracelets.
Other: Straight, Ravenclaw, no glasses.
Name: Jemma Lilith (I’m feeling semi creative today)
Age: 21
Gender: (sorry) Female (if you need guys I’ll change it)
Looks: https://pin.it/rng2soj7xh55fl
Attire: https://pin.it/hsaycw25wxxyne (is that ok)
Personality: kinda quiet, introverted; she keeps mostly to herself, but isn’t afraid to stand up for herself if necessary; doesn’t get attached to much, but cares a bunch if she does
Flaws: shy and pretty unwilling to put herself out there, um
Talents: she’s a pretty good baker, and a bit of an artist; also she excells at throwing darts… um her magic is like growing stuff (plants and trees and stuff) I guess idk someone prob took that already
Hobbies: sketching, reading, making up new stuff to bake, um
Favorite Weapon: Dart(s) (is that ok)
Worst Fear: shame
One Random Fact: loves strawberries
Other: pan, prob either Slytherin or Hufflepuff, no glasses
Here's mine
Name: Uriah Roux
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Looks: Long wavy jet black hair usually in bun or ponytail, dark brown eyes, tan skin, 5'8, dimples, can really pull off the raised eyebrow look, lean
Attire: Brown pants, brown tunic, sky blue cloak, combat boots, feather necklace
Personality: ENTP, Cinnamon roll, Tries his best to act tough, outgoing
Flaws: Dislikes practical matters, insensitive, blunt, Doesn't take things seriously
Talents: Magic (duh), flexible, fast runner, cooking, rapping
Hobbies: Collecting, cooking, sketching
Favorite Weapon: Simple wooden Staff
Worst Fear: His life won't be worth anything
One Random Fact: If he was a song, he'd be Dynamite by Taio Cruz
Other: Slytherin
(Turty Imma ask you to go back and develop her a bit more when you're not on your phone k?)
//yeah sure I’m in a bit of a rush rn lol
Actually I have a character who would work better for this. Actually two characters. Can I use them?
(Nope one per person)
No problem! Just wanted to check with you first!